Don't say goodbye

Times running out on us.
I came back too late.
I hope to stay with you until the first snow.
So I can wear those socks that you bought me.
But I will die before that,because of you.
I know it hurts for you to be with me.
But I love you.

Look at me.

 

It is just the beginning .
It will hurt more later.
You will hurt more than me.

 

 

I wish I'd hurt for you.
Don't take me suddenly.
Give me enough time
to say goodbye.

 

 

Fool.If it hurts,scream.
Hold me and cry.
Don't try to hide it.
It hurts me so much.
I feel as if I'd die before you!
My heart.. It's broken.
Because I love you enough
for my heart to burn.
Medicine doesn't work anymore.

 

 

It is raining.
The rain can't cool down
my love for you.

 

Come on,don't follow me
into my dreams.

 

When I am with you at night
it feels as if it were day.

 

Now I believe that phrase

that you can see with eyes closed.

 

I am still waiting for that day to come...

Don't say goodbye. . .

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[.shalynn.009.]

"Times running out on us." Should be "Time's"

"I hope to stay with you until the first snow.
So I can wear those socks that you bought me." I like these lines. Something so simple that means so much. It's the small things that mean a lot.

"Come on,don't follow me" I like the contrast within this one line.

Although this isn't my favorite poem of yours, I like it. Saying goodbye is a hard thing, and you got the heartbreak and difficulty of it across well. Good job.

[Coyote Poetry]

The goodbyes leave great sadness on our soul. We need more hellos. A excellent poem. I like the description and the ending.
Coyote

[kyrie]

wonderful. outspoken, breaking down defenses and walls, pure and honest. it's a great write. keep it up!

[♥Kaitlyn♥]

very powerful! i love it

[~Princess~]

intense i love the emotions coming out of it. It's like it's screaming to be heard. Good job hun.

[Marie Harrison]

So sad, such emotion. Wow!

[TheFemininePad]

Emotional and powerful. This was a really great read. The imagery brought a memory to mind. I pictured both of you standing in the dark in a bad rain. Your both don't want to leave, and saying good bye can be one of the most painful moments in life. You demonstrated this so well in this poem.

[Dilan Gray]

I love the lines "The rain can't cool down my love for you." Great poem.

[Nat.]

The third and second stanza from the end i can totally connect to because my dreams seem very real. The ending stanzas really tie the poem together.

[Amanda_Rose]

When I'm with you at night
it feels as if it were day.


brilliant!

[Brad]

saying good bye is too final unless you absolutely know it's done