Time

you must value your time

One thing moving

tic tic 

tic tic

Taking your age away

Making you feel old

Giving you experience in each day

You get used to it

You have to wait for it

but it doesn't wait for you

It never stops for anyone

giving you enough

but still something less

You always need it more

more for each day

Some period ends with happiness

Some ends with gloominess

One thing is still moving...

Reviews

[.shalynn.009.]

Ooh, I got chills with that ending line. A wonderful characterization of time. I like how you started out with three line stanzas, went to two-line stanzas, adn ended with one line, in a kind of progression, the way time progressed, leaving the speaker of the poem behind. This underscored the tone, that feeling of wanting more time, but having it slip away, just like the number of lines in the stanzas dwindled away. Possibly my favorite that you have written. Well done.

[Sarah McConnaughey]

Very true:

"It never stops for anyone
giving you enough
but still something less"

I loved it. :)

[♥Kaitlyn♥]

This is very true
I think anyone could relate..
Goob job!
:)
100/100

[ForTheWorld]

it's wonderful, this is so true!!!...i love the meaning, and you're right when you said it never stop just for anyone, it never gives chances to anyone, time is precious so just don't waste it, you have to know where to use it, or else the precious diamond on the hundreds of fakes will vanish forever, and you will never have a chance again to find it

[Alicia™]

Beautiful! Time really doesn't stand still for anyone at all.

[Sweets]

Very well written! :D

[{A}shley {B}lack @-;-]

great structure and font to this piece also great idea by using time as we never run out of it

thank you for sharing this piece

100/100

[Richard Williams]

A good poem on time, for it always wins, and doesn't wait for any of us. We can't beat time. A direct and succinct look at a timeless subject. We should all honor time in a way. And embrace it.

[Alvin L. Kathembe]

very true...thanks for sharing!

[Kate Hunter]

nice job. very well written.

[Mauricio Montoya]

nice.