A Big Mistake

here i want to tell about my mistakes... trying to correct them in my remaining life:(

Sometimes I think talking to you

is a mistake

Telling you my feelings is a mistake

you never try to understand my feelings..

I was stupid to take you

as my everything.

I was stupid to see you

as my bestfriend

you never try to be in my position

Sometimes I feel like 

giving up on you.

I will always remember this mistake

and will never do it again ever.

Mistakes taught us not to trust 

someone again 

But it really pains when 

that someone really means a lot.

Author's Note

Please review and rate it..any thing you want to say..
i will be very happy to see it..
either good or bad...thank you..

Reviews

[anindita]

I know how it feels when you consider someone to be your everything and then one fine day you realise you are nothing more than an option in his or her life. The feeling sucks!!
Anything which comes out straight from the heart is always good and appreciable!!

[Lively]

Nice and simple..

[Kes]

Harsh. I like it.
Can relate. =]

[?]

Very sad piece
But I think in the pain, in the hurt, the mistakes, this is when we learn, when we grow ourselves within.

[Julie Beth]

this is so sad but i really like it awesome job :)

[Lily Mae]

A powerful write..x A painful journey of mistrust and loss..x

[Coyote Poetry]

There is wisdom in your words. I like the many powerful and true quotes. Life can be hard. Better to truth people and hope for the best. I like the desire and the ending to this excellent poem.
Coyote

[TheMizFit]

This is a nice work! I know what it feels like when you want to give up on someone but they mean a lot to you. Good job!

[Reena]

Mistakes are like failures--mere stepping stones to success. We make them so that we can learn from them. Understood what you were trying to convey but pain only makes us appreciate pleasure more.