A Big Mistake

here i want to tell about my mistakes... trying to correct them in my remaining life:(

Sometimes I think talking to you

is a mistake

Telling you my feelings is a mistake

you never try to understand my feelings..

I was stupid to take you

as my everything.

I was stupid to see you

as my bestfriend

you never try to be in my position

Sometimes I feel like 

giving up on you.

I will always remember this mistake

and will never do it again ever.

Mistakes taught us not to trust 

someone again 

But it really pains when 

that someone really means a lot.

Author's Note

Please review and rate it..any thing you want to say..
i will be very happy to see it..
either good or bad...thank you..

Reviews

[anindita]

I know how it feels when you consider someone to be your everything and then one fine day you realise you are nothing more than an option in his or her life. The feeling sucks!!
Anything which comes out straight from the heart is always good and appreciable!!

[Cricket Kidd]

errors are a natural and important part of the learning process, not an indication that one lacks ability. I heard that quote somewhere...
good poem though!

[trainwreck]

This was pretty good. I like your use of font and color. Just, don't rely on them to convey emotion too much.

[Megan]

I really like this!!!!!!! And I really like the picture at the top, and the one of the quote beneath it. On a personal level, hesitating to make any decision at all is something I struggle with. So, I can really relate to this. I also like how this poem seems to end on the pain, rather than the mistake made and the knowledge gained from experience not to make the same mistake again. it's like, talking about how mistakes may teach you something, but they also hurt a lot. Doesn't mean you should eliminate yourself from making decisions entirely though... That's what I got from this poem at least. :)

[Katseye]

Sad but I think we've all been there at one time or anoter. Good write.

[*skittlez*]

this is very cute

This is good. The form you use here made the flow a little choppy for me. Could just be the way I was reading it though.

[snopadelic]

Unrequinted love, dohh know that feeling well. I liked it. I can relate . very good

[eglantine]

The present tense caught me off-guard but I like it; it's different. For this website, the color in the text is alright, but normally I'd reccomend making it all black ink.

[Brad]

the first photo says it all~how can we know it's a mistake unless we try it....it's those bumps and bruises that make us who we are

[HappyTaylor]

I understand this completely. It's also very well written and I like the pictures. :) Great job!