Why You Have Left

some people left our lives after making a mark in our heart... this poem is about same person...left unsaid:(

Some things still I want to say

You are not here anymore..

this craziness breaks me away

Not in my thoughts

Not in my words

Not in my calls

Not in my unseen messages

But still you are there

in my heart

Sometimes I want to share a lucid dream

to make you mine.

Some chances I haven't taken up yet

This mistake pays me recently

You are not here anymore..

this craziness breaks me away

Not in my thoughts

Not in my words

Not in my calls

Not in my unseen messages

But still you are there

in my dreams

I love my Dreams

since you are there in it

with no boundaries.

I love my heart

since you are there in it

with each new blood forming
each day.

I love me

since you are there in it

with each part belongs to you... 

Author's Note

Review & Rate this poem ...i hope you like it..
give any type of your comments..
i will really appreciate it:)

Reviews

[Blue Moon Ice Cream]

Okay...I really hate to start off a review on a negative note, but I have to say this...when there are typos at the beginning of a poem (there should be a space in "somethings", and "crazyness" is spelled "craziness"), it distracts me immediately from what you're trying to say. It's difficult for a poem to really suck me in when I'm wondering if there are going to be more typos all the way through. Other than that, once I reread this, it was enjoyable! Arwa Bharmal is right that this could describe 'Inception' very well!

[Sukriti Suki]

I like the poem, the emotion although the different colours distracted me a bit.

[☯]

A very simple and captivating read. The pictures make it come alive and the love is adorable and heartwarming. Great write. :)

[indu]

boundation - not a word. it should be boundaries.
its a love song. :)

[Aleyah]

I really like how much emotions just comes pouring out of your poems. It seriously it legitimately awesome. I really like it. Good poem, I really like the second to last stanza. Awesome. :)

[Jazique]

I love all the pics on this well anyways I really enjoyed the poem. So sweet with color and simple. Nicely done.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This is from the part of the heart we love the most.

[unknown]

Beautiful!!!

[brenda]

this is great and sweet !!:)

[Brianna Brie]

Interesting take on love. I think that is what love should be like. The one we love should be able to compliment us. So, we can say we feel good about the person we are with them.