Why You Have Left

some people left our lives after making a mark in our heart... this poem is about same person...left unsaid:(

Some things still I want to say

You are not here anymore..

this craziness breaks me away

Not in my thoughts

Not in my words

Not in my calls

Not in my unseen messages

But still you are there

in my heart

Sometimes I want to share a lucid dream

to make you mine.

Some chances I haven't taken up yet

This mistake pays me recently

You are not here anymore..

this craziness breaks me away

Not in my thoughts

Not in my words

Not in my calls

Not in my unseen messages

But still you are there

in my dreams

I love my Dreams

since you are there in it

with no boundaries.

I love my heart

since you are there in it

with each new blood forming
each day.

I love me

since you are there in it

with each part belongs to you... 

Author's Note

Review & Rate this poem ...i hope you like it..
give any type of your comments..
i will really appreciate it:)

Reviews

[Blue Moon Ice Cream]

Okay...I really hate to start off a review on a negative note, but I have to say this...when there are typos at the beginning of a poem (there should be a space in "somethings", and "crazyness" is spelled "craziness"), it distracts me immediately from what you're trying to say. It's difficult for a poem to really suck me in when I'm wondering if there are going to be more typos all the way through. Other than that, once I reread this, it was enjoyable! Arwa Bharmal is right that this could describe 'Inception' very well!

[Alicia Schroeder]

Very heartfelt peice.. Great write..

[Ian Faraway]

Very intimate and very well written. The bold, highlighted words definitely brought out its meaning. This is maybe the first poem I've read that has nothing to do with sadness or anger but longing. J'adore.

[-Scribe in Style-]

It kinda reminds me of a film I saw quite recently called 'Inception'. It describes the main character from there and a side story line that continues through out the movie.
It is nevertheless definitely a well written piece.

[*]

While I'm sure this is written about a relationship, I related to it in another way. I read it in a way of missing my brother who is no longer here. I really like that your poem as a general meaning of missing someone and longing for them but it can be read in many different ways. People of different circumstances can relate to it. This is a great write! :)

[akapr17other]

Distance is painful. Thanks for sharing your emotions through such beautiful words, it makes it easier to read.

[patricia]

Great visuals! Beautifully written. The whole peice gave me one of those rare moments
when suddenly I felt at peace. Thankyou.

[Suzy Q]

I really like this poem, especially since it pertains to my current situation. I like your format of displaying this poem. It is easier to see what words you want to emphasize.

[Eile MacIntyre]

I love my dreams
since you are there in it
with no boundaries.

That's the coolest thing ever.

[msharma]

Beautifully penned poem ,the thoughts are strong to hol.d you through out the poem

[NeonWolves]

This hits you in the heart. Its sad and I have felt this way before so the pain from it is showed very well in this piece. Its amazingly written. The pictures add emotion and the color changes added a nice touch to it too. Im glad you shared this. Powerful piece. Great job.