Why You Have Left

some people left our lives after making a mark in our heart... this poem is about same person...left unsaid:(

Some things still I want to say

You are not here anymore..

this craziness breaks me away

Not in my thoughts

Not in my words

Not in my calls

Not in my unseen messages

But still you are there

in my heart

Sometimes I want to share a lucid dream

to make you mine.

Some chances I haven't taken up yet

This mistake pays me recently

You are not here anymore..

this craziness breaks me away

Not in my thoughts

Not in my words

Not in my calls

Not in my unseen messages

But still you are there

in my dreams

I love my Dreams

since you are there in it

with no boundaries.

I love my heart

since you are there in it

with each new blood forming
each day.

I love me

since you are there in it

with each part belongs to you... 

Author's Note

Review & Rate this poem ...i hope you like it..
give any type of your comments..
i will really appreciate it:)

Reviews

[Blue Moon Ice Cream]

Okay...I really hate to start off a review on a negative note, but I have to say this...when there are typos at the beginning of a poem (there should be a space in "somethings", and "crazyness" is spelled "craziness"), it distracts me immediately from what you're trying to say. It's difficult for a poem to really suck me in when I'm wondering if there are going to be more typos all the way through. Other than that, once I reread this, it was enjoyable! Arwa Bharmal is right that this could describe 'Inception' very well!

[Farrah Grahm]

Very sweet :)

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

This is beautiful. So full of feelings :-)This is beautiful. So full of feelings :-)

[Daytonight]

Beautiful form and use of colors to portray your feelings. Well done. Keep on penning.

[Loner]

A great emotional punch u have given to the reader through this tearful poem of yrs my friend! ..... love is not the name of possessing the person you love but is the name of keep loving the person till your last breath when you cannot reach out to that person ...... awesome write!

[thoughts of jade]

i felt the sadness in your poem, my eyes are turning watery now since someone left me just recently...

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Nice set up; really like the ending.

[torments_scribe]

I loved the longing and inability to let go. You can really feel the pain and loneliness of not being able to move on. The pictures were a really creative touch :)

[J.e.s.s.i.c.a]

I love the creative way you worded this and added pictures and colors. I think it added a lot to the poem. I think it was very heartfelt and straight to the point, so much so that it seemed to be a blunt description of how you feel. Great job!

[Richard Williams]

Sincere words, a unique take in a poem that is most heartfelt. A very pleasant read.