Nobody knows that I have a crush on you

Crush is something you can't resist from..it happens because it happens(for no reason)

You have me hypnotized,so mesmerized

Every time you talk to me,

I'm terrified to be me..

I'm too shy to speak

I just want everybody to disappear

just you and me be here

you have many dear friends

that make me emulous

I wish you would have known this someday

that I have a crush on you..

You are so busy in your own world

I wish you have known that I have

a crush on you..

You seem special everyday

your bright magical face

brought sunshine to me

Everybody is here but nobody knows

that I have a crush on you

Author's Note

Please read and review this piece..let me know your thoughts..
rate it also...

Reviews

[Chirinos20]

we always have fear. But how can you get pass the first step. How can you find love if you don't have the guts to tell that person what you feel. It is true, you might get turned down many times before you find love. This is the true beauty of finding love! Never let fear run your life. For life is beautiful. This is a great peace! Great job!

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This is a sweet poem. You have broken the seal on an emotion that is timeless.
I'm sure that everyone can relate. I definitely can.

[snopadelic]

aww that's a nice poem. I know how the auther feels too shy ot speak up and too scared. I like the colourful font

[Tom Benson]

I see in this one we're back to the colourful fonts ...

This is a cute write and I wondered if it was based on truth. If it is ... tell him!

Nicely done.

[Roxi L]

This poem should be my theme poem. I am the same way. I love this poem!

Writing keeps the dream alive
~Roxi/V~

[Becky C Strukamp]

This so reminds me of my grade school, jr high school and high school days when there were so many cute boys that I just melted in their presence

Well penned! I enjoyed reading this.

[Hello, Goodbye]

nice candid expression... these crush emotions can be even more painful..

[Coyote Poetry]

Those crushes last forever. I still remember my crushes 36 years later. I like how you told the story in the poem. A very nice ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[futurepast.]

A crush can be as beautiful as the feeling, or as hurtful as the fear of telling the truth. This writing shows the hesitation of moving forward because of your shyness or not being like her friends.
Just one mistake towards the end, it should be 'You seem' instead of 'You seems' .. and in the third paragraph, correct it to 'I wish you would have known'
A cute write.

[∂αʌ<..]

i have a deep Crush on this one!!>>sighsss