Nobody knows that I have a crush on you

Crush is something you can't resist from..it happens because it happens(for no reason)

You have me hypnotized,so mesmerized

Every time you talk to me,

I'm terrified to be me..

I'm too shy to speak

I just want everybody to disappear

just you and me be here

you have many dear friends

that make me emulous

I wish you would have known this someday

that I have a crush on you..

You are so busy in your own world

I wish you have known that I have

a crush on you..

You seem special everyday

your bright magical face

brought sunshine to me

Everybody is here but nobody knows

that I have a crush on you

Author's Note

Please read and review this piece..let me know your thoughts..
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Reviews

[Chirinos20]

we always have fear. But how can you get pass the first step. How can you find love if you don't have the guts to tell that person what you feel. It is true, you might get turned down many times before you find love. This is the true beauty of finding love! Never let fear run your life. For life is beautiful. This is a great peace! Great job!

[Hatchling]

this is so sweet.

[Kyla H]

Hmm, you seem to be hiding your feelings for this person, but your words speak so clearly to how you feel. This is nicely done.

[Raspberry Rebel]

Fear of being honest about our feelings often make us miss out on what could be a beautiful relationship...Do we reveal our truest, deepest feelings or remain forever simply dreaming about what could be?
A lovely poem tentative, with a deep sense of longing and if only...

[Gomer LePoet]

Ah, the "Crush", an enviable feeling. nothing is quite as wonderful as the crush for another person. May the "Crush" last forever in our hearts. I like this

[?]

This is sweet, beautiful and heart warming.

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

A true write which captures feelings exactly. without exaggeration. love it :)

[Dushyant Thadani]

I know this feeling... Our heart always skips a beat when we see someone like this... Its so very beautiful and it warms our heart... Great job...

[thoughts of jade]

well done... i love how colorful you made your poem... its even more beautiful that way

[Sunflower 20]

oooh, this made me smile :) its very easy to relate to the emotions you have explored, well done! my only criticism would be to consider making it longer, but other than that, nice job and great use of colour.

[Raven Starhawk]

Awww...this is familiar territory. I have had a crush a time or two but was too afraid to let anyone know especially said person. The feelings involved are intense but in my experience fade away with time. This was well penned.