Nobody knows that I have a crush on you

Nobody knows that I have a crush on you

A Poem by Akshat♥
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Crush is something you can't resist from..it happens because it happens(for no reason)

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You have me hypnotized,so mesmerized
Every time you talk to me,
I'm terrified to be me..
I'm too shy to speak

I just want everybody to disappear
just you and me be here

you have many dear friends
that make me emulous
I wish you would have known this someday
that I have a crush on you..

You are so busy in your own world
I wish you have known that I have
a crush on you..

You seem special everyday
your bright magical face
brought sunshine to me

Everybody is here but nobody knows
that I have a crush on you

© 2013 Akshat♥


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we always have fear. But how can you get pass the first step. How can you find love if you don't have the guts to tell that person what you feel. It is true, you might get turned down many times before you find love. This is the true beauty of finding love! Never let fear run your life. For life is beautiful. This is a great peace! Great job!

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Great piece that shows your fear. :) Very good work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I know exactly how that is... so easy to relate to. Nice job.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MAN! I am in this very position right now and I can relate big time! I wish I could give this to him. Great write! I really loved this

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Even though the subject is frequently written about, this one spoke a lot more in my opinion. I like it a lot. You did well.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

love it, reminds me of my high school days.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very sweet. Makes me think of when i was in high school and love was sweet and tender.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sweet

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Been there, did that

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i hate when they do that to a guy!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very strong poem. It is hard to put your emotions in words and even harder to put them out there for people to see. Maybe the crush knows, maybe not, only one way to find out..

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Akshat♥
Akshat♥

New Delhi, India



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