I can't feel anything

I can't feel anything

A Poem by Akshat♥
"

These days i feel like nothing...people understand me in a wrong way.. if i say something..things will get worse ..

"
I can't feel anything
not a single space

Impossible to conceive  
why people react in different  ways

Sometimes I feel like crying
taking my emotions coming from behind..

If you judge me that means you don't love me 
Its hard to express,
harder to impress..

Sometimes clearing doubts 
does not solve anything
a hint of pain can be seen

You can trust someone once
but you cannot hate them twice

Life is always balanced
You have to think wise

Stand yourself back
Give them another chance
I really can't go on this way

Because I can't feel anything
not a single space

© 2013 Akshat♥


Author's Note

Akshat♥
Honest reviews please...
your time is very important for me..thanks for reviewing my work so far:)

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Featured Review

The turbulent emotions in this piece overwhelm the reader and flow seamlessly from one strong statement to another. I think this piece shows the weary side of someone who daily puts a piece of themselves out only to be misunderstood. We all feel this way at one point or another, but i also have to add that it created a very powerful piece of poetry as well. Phenomenal work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




Reviews

It's so good! The rhyming, the emotions, everything is just so well written! Keep writing!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Akshat♥

6 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Anjali

6 Years Ago

You are welcome!
I just want to say that

There would be someone who will definitely change your life
and then you'll be full of Love and Emotions!

Great Piece!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Akshat♥

6 Years Ago

I never see anyone good so far. I love people and at the end they show their true colors. Thank you .. read more
I never thought about someone not loving you if they are judging you - this makes total sense - nice work

Posted 10 Years Ago


Akshat♥

9 Years Ago

Thank you:)
lovely poem! truth of life in a single poem! great work!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Akshat♥

10 Years Ago

Thank you :)
This is very good. :) You've expressed yourself well.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Akshat♥

10 Years Ago

Thank you:)
Your writing style is simply profound! he intensity is really getting conveyed here....superb!
I think of all ur poems i have read up until now this one is my favorite just because of its raw integrity and honesty. KUDOS!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Akshat♥

10 Years Ago

Thank you dear :)
i could feel the really complicated blend of emotions, in this one...
life at times really becomes so messy, and nothing goes well, that we ultimately wonder whats wrong..
but then there's something really interesting about every rough times, that it has a definite time for which it stays..so all we can do is to simply face it with the hope, that it will soon go...

this is really that precious time when we actually need our support, and keep reminding ourselves that its not always important that whatever the others conclude about us or rather life at some times proves us is true, because thats simply a time to make our self strong...and hence, prove it ,that if life has the art of creating mess, we are filled with that great energy to convert it into
our most essentials weapons,....Happiness:)

this poem was completely balanced, and clearly reflected the imbalance
of emotions at some hard and rough phases of life...

completely enjoyed reading..
well done

Posted 10 Years Ago


Akshat♥

10 Years Ago

Thank you saumya :)
Saumya

10 Years Ago

you're welcome:)
it's a blend of emotions and thoughts and nice flow of the poem.... one statement to another, nice correlation

Posted 10 Years Ago


Akshat♥

10 Years Ago

Thank you dear :)
Akshat I love this.. is very powerful.. it makes me wonder what had happen to you when you wrote this.. but only your heart and mind can speak to itself.. Keep writing..

Posted 10 Years Ago


Akshat♥

10 Years Ago

Thank you :)
INTRODUCTION

FIRST IMPRESSION

1. I COULD not feel.
2. I WAS so sad.
3. I HAD suicidal thoughts.
4. I EXPERIENCED Abilify.
5. I DID feel self pity.

Now, I am just angry.

REALISM OF THE POETRY

"I can't feel anything
not a single space"

INTERPRETATION: It is the feeling of muscles tightened.

OVERALL INTERPRETATION

1. It seems to me to be an emotional rollarcoaster.
2. It appears that you have tried to convince yourself.
3. It appears to me that you express intelligence.
4. It appears to me that you no longer feel this way.
5. It appears to me this is a photographic poem of emotion.

This one hit close to home.

p.s. This one was brilliantly weaved.
p.s.s. It is raw
p.s.s.s. It is awesome peaches!


Posted 10 Years Ago


Akshat♥

10 Years Ago

I want people...work comes after that :P
Vria P Crow

10 Years Ago

Yeah, I agree!
Akshat♥

10 Years Ago

:)

First Page first
Previous Page prev
1
Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

2684 Views
101 Reviews
Rating
Shelved in 3 Libraries
Added on June 4, 2012
Last Updated on July 26, 2013

Author

Akshat♥
Akshat♥

New Delhi, India



About
hello(Namaste), You can call me (or ashu), I LOVE MYSELF...!! :-P I am methodical,practical and a great friend....!!! I never make snap decisions, preferring to weigh the pros and cons of every.. more..

Writing
Miracle Miracle

A Poem by Akshat♥



Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


Numb Numb

A Poem by Akshat♥