Mark The Day

We can make breakthroughs, and fix our hearts, through our tragedies. We can find what we've been looking for.

Mark the day we met

Now my dear, don't you fret

It took a while yet

And at first you seemed a threat

But now I mark the day we met

You and I

When the painful years finally ended

When I've felt every emotion

Cried enough to make my own ocean 

And name it after you

Oh yes,

Do I have regrets

Faces I couldn't forget

But now

It's a canyon kind of feeling 

Through all the lows and highs

Every green sunrise

Stormy winter skies

My heart's reprise

No more dead butterflies

No, not with you around

Author's Note

YES. I know, another love poem, but it's what I love to write, and until you get my actual Adventure/Romance NOVELS... here, have another love poem. Inspired by the GREAT Gabbie Hanna, if you don't know who she is, check her out! Have a great day!

Reviews

[Marina]

A fine poem, Colacat. The poem summarises the whole gamut of emotions from the first meetings with a stranger to the blossoming and heartaches of love to the realisation that love is better with them by your side. "A canyon kind of feeling"....is a great line and we cherish those marked days that someone special entered our lives. I enjoyed the poem and the beauty of the reality within. 💛

[Vertigo Cat1111]

Thank you so much! Your reviews are always so kind and encouraging and I appreciate them so very much. (:

[Coyote Poetry]

I loved this poem.
It's a canyon kind of feeling
Through all the lows and highs
"Every green sunrise
Stormy winter skies
My heart's reprise
No more dead butterflies
No, not with you around"
The above lines, hopeful and wonderful. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Vertigo Cat1111]

Thank you so, so much! I appreciate the kindness endlessly, it means a lot.

[Coyote Poetry]

Hello my friend and you are welcome.

[VALORMORE DE PLUME]

This is a good example of overcoming our worries, and turning our frown upside-down.

[Vertigo Cat1111]

Thank you so much! I really appreciate the kind words.

[Sami Khalil]

Very lovely. I like a lot of the phraseology. The ups and downs of a relationships is evident. It also sounded like a song in many places. Kudos

[Vertigo Cat1111]

Thank you! I always have kind of a musical beat in my mind when I write poetry, so I appreciate your insight into that!

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! Good to know. You are welcome.

[Sami Khalil]

"t's a canyon kind of feeling
Through all the lows and highs
Every green sunrise
Stormy winter skies"

[Just Kim]

emotional read here, nicely expressed.. Nicely written

[Vertigo Cat1111]

Thank you son much!

[barleygirl]

This doesn't really feel like a love poem, but more like a friend poem. It reminds me of a friend I once blocked for a year or so & now I love him dearly. It's amazing how our understandings evolve & those we couldn't stand become those we adore. We could all stand to be less rigid about liking & disliking people. It's not always a black-and-white proposition, but rather, shades of gray on a continuum always changing. Love how you use geological formations to symbolize feelings & challenges (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Vertigo Cat1111]

Thank you so much! I really appreciate it

[Ladysue]

The ups and downs of love to a ‘canyon kind of feeling’ great line.. I enjoyed the read. The poem was genuine and wonderfully expressed.

[Vertigo Cat1111]

Thank you so much! I really appreciate such a kind review

[Ladysue]

My pleasure. Have a great weekend..

[Vari]

Nicely carved phrases! I like the way you took from starting to ending explaining the gist and many reader will catch it easily. Yes, the poem is painful with hope of rising and moving on ahead in life is magnificently penned. "Sooner or later we've all got to let go of our past.” Glad to read keep writing.

[Vertigo Cat1111]

Thank you so so much! This review means a lot to me, and might I add, I love your profile picture, it’s beautiful.

[Vari]

Pleasure to hear and thanks for compliment!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Nice rhymes and romantic gestures in this as the protagonist expresses her love in such a vivid fashion that can only be seen as love.

[Vertigo Cat1111]

Thank you so much for the kind words! It's highly appreciated.

[Jess]

I really enjoyed the way you describe the progression of a relationship. You allow the reader to take the journey with you from beginning to end. Powerful imagery as well. Wonderful read. Thanks for sharing!

[Vertigo Cat1111]

Thank you! I'm so happy you took the time to read this, so thank you again.