Survive in this Game

Survive in this Game

A Poem by Desmund Tiny
"

in this cruel game.... I want to survive and live

"

What kind of joke is this?!

This place is hell not bliss

In this game, we’ve become desperate

As it twist our fate

 

Can you hear the voices screaming?

A lost life, our souls are slowly dying
Imprisoned in the darkness in this room

As our life spin in the spiral of doom

 

Let me sleep with one eye open

Because there’s no one to trust except this pain

Grim slowly devour my heart and brain

But I’ll never give up no matter what happen

Blood stains in my hands
This nightmare will never end
I have kept this bleeding heart
Now that I’ve gone this so far

In this fight, I have to survive
When this game ends, I want to be alive

 

© 2011 Desmund Tiny


Author's Note

Desmund Tiny
I wrote this because I saw some movies about survival game.... the morbid type.... ^^.

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I am in LOVE with this piece. It actually kinda fits for life like Jordan said. Great write.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is an awesome write! Kinda applies to life in general too! not just the survival game :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


great!

Posted 9 Years Ago


I really liked this. The text of red really added to the situation and topic. In life, it is a game and it is our job to survive it. There is no one to trust later on down the road, we learn that at a young age...and soon, we all must fend for ourselves. It is tough, but we are all able to achieve it and find our own way out. It may not be easy, but if we want to survive: "Desperate times call for desperate measures." We can't all take the easy way out.

Posted 9 Years Ago


You like morbid things, don't you? I find this piece interesting and it made me think of some video games that includes zombies. You've written this well.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Nicely done. Love the write.
ha, yup we try to survive in this little place.. our own way... =)

Great write!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Stunning layout and approach to styling that enhances the poem to
another dimension...
And yes...some say it's all about survival, our innate actions are all
about it, wether we like it or not...
Love it!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Ha ha This is f-ing awesome. An instant favorite. I love the style and visuals with the font and everything. Very well written. I love this Desmund..xx

Posted 9 Years Ago


Haha! Suntukan n lng... XD
Makes me remember the game "Alien Shooter"...Lolz...
Anyway, I enjoyed reading with the very creative font style!
:)))

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Desmund Tiny
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I just want the name "Desmund Tiny" because it is one of my favorite character in the Novel "Darren Shan" but you can call me Des. ^^, errr.. Hello to my old writings!~ wew it's been years I gues.. more..

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