Photographs

Photographs

A Poem by Evelynn

I'm looking through the photographs
Of the memories we used to have
When your arms would wrap around my waist
I'm flipping through the pages
Of the book of our different stages
And I can't help but wonder if I've been replaced
I'm replaying our love in the version of a movie
But the more I watch it, the more it turns gloomy
So I need to know, have those memories been erased

© 2018 Evelynn


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This reminds me of the song "A picture of you".

You are an amazing writer and I hope you never stop writing these poems.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Evelynn

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much!!!
SO MUCH EMOTION. Old photos can bring out so much heartache. I love how easy your writing is to relate to. Well done.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Evelynn

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much!!
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Gee
They'll be a few women ( and men) who'll relate to this.
S**t happens , people change, want different things from life. Folk, I think, should live a little, get all out of their system before marrying. No good a woman marrying the first sausage, wielding fella that shows an interest in her. She needs to go and sample a few more, if need be more than a few.
Good morning

Posted 1 Year Ago


Sad reflections, uncomfortable feelings to think your past has been erased. More often than not these are the emotions that follow a breakup. You can't wipe out the past. You can try and forget it, but that rarely works. Poignant lines.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


Wow. I would hate to think of myself or memories being erased. If I was a cryer I may shed a tear. Very well written. Looking forward to reading more of your work.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Evelynn

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much!
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Rye
so heart tugging. love the rhyme scheme.

Posted 1 Year Ago


I like the melancholy and reflective nature of this ... and the choice of rhyming pattern also. Nicely done. ~Jim


Posted 1 Year Ago


Evelynn

1 Year Ago

Thank you!
Very well written!
The Love and sadness in this piece is something you can feel with every line.
Beautifully done :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Evelynn

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much!
This is precisely what have been going through right now and i don't think i could write it any better!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Evelynn

1 Year Ago

Thank and I'm so sorry that you are going through this

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