so close to you...

so close to you...

A Poem by Princy

A random poem that struck me.


I want to be so close to you that the only music I could hear would be the beat of your heart.

The only sight I could admire would be your appealing smile and your innocent eyes.

The only piece of heaven I could feel would be your arms wrapped around mine.

And the only wish I could make would be this moment, which should last forever.



© 2010 Princy

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Posted 13 Years Ago

Nicely written. Short n sweet!
Well done! ;)

Posted 14 Years Ago

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Short yet sweet.. The Perfect Ode To Love.. Well written and nice read !!

Posted 14 Years Ago

A very passionate poem indeed. You picture the love beautifully. I like the icon & the picture you choose also. :-)

Posted 14 Years Ago

i love the passion of this piece the imagery is nicely done..overall nice job on this... overall a very beautiful piece very uplifting... nice job!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago

you did a great job there. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago

This is wonderful, So very beuatiful!
I like the font you used and the color.
A write so well written.

Posted 14 Years Ago

Almost like a song your words are flowing. Poem is beautiful and hopeful. A outstanding poem.

Posted 14 Years Ago

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8 Reviews
Added on March 5, 2010
Last Updated on June 10, 2010
Tags: love, together, forever, heaven, bliss, i love you, wish



Mumbai, Maharashtra, India

I believe in love and in arguing, in jamming out by yourself in the car, dancing in the rain & miracles, smiling till your cheeks hurt, and being awesome despite the odds! =) more..

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A Poem by Princy

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