Sparkle

its simple really

that sunny day

 

we knelt together on our treasured beach

 

seeking moonstones and opals ...

 

and between my finger and thumb 

 

I held a grain of sand

 

and let it sparkle before your inquistive eyes

 

and watched it quietly, slowly

 

glisten into a memory   

 

Reviews

[Brad]

you write like nicolas sparks, only more realistically

[Coyote Poetry]

You create a beautiful vision and place to be with your words. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Dani]

All the small things. Great write.

[Marie Harrison]

Awe...I see it shimmer now and disappear into my head. Lovely memory.

[Jasmine]

simple yet brilliant. memories are made of these.

[kuru]

this is poetry...love it!

[MuSe Ampoule]

infinite beauty in an infinitesimal speck.

Gleaming short piece!

[Kerry O'Connor]

There's treasure indeed in these lines, none so precious as the message passed unspoken between the two people.

[Arthur Henn]

Robin, there is an ultimate sign of love here - One that is etched within the walls of a memory that will last forever.

A beautiful eight line prose that just sparkles

Art

[G. K. Bostic]

This is like a tiiny pearl that comes from that little grain of sand. Sounds like a truly lovely memory. :)