Silent

 

 

I stood there,silent

 

and I found my messiah

 

he was deep inside

 

 

Reviews

[E.H. Monroe]

Of course, my brain goes to breaking the cherry where a young man realizes all that he ever needs to follow was just pushed into some chick in the bathroom of her house.
That's right, I said it. We all thought we were gods in that moment..and it was deep inside
Ho Ho...I'll be the w***e mouthed sailor

[Poetic Beauty]

It is always good when we can find our messiah. Looking deep inside is a great place to start.

[FireWoman]

Purity and truth.

[just rose.]

good use of the form - profound and intimate.

[Ed Hart]

yes, that's the truth of it

[Tina Kline]

Wow, very powerful and intense. Yes, what's most important is what is within us and if we ever stop long enough and pay attention we'd discover that. But that seems to be one of the hardest things to do. This is great!

[roarke]

yep. silence does open the doors to within. Everything is from within. The dialogue to ensue need not be lengthy or any more detailed. That's the beauty of it all.

[G. K. Bostic]

If only we could more often be silent and look...and listen......Excellent!!!!!

[Emily B]

perfection

[Alicante lullaby]

yes,its deep inside us,our healer,we just need to identify him.