Left here to Die.

Left here to Die.

A Poem by Sanjh
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A sad romantic song on betrayal

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The pain in my heart,
Was not in my destiny...
The tears in my eyes,
Were not meant for me...
This life of sadness,
Is not what i asked for....
Yeah you sold out your heart,
And it was never me...

 

I took the pain of your share,
and every last one of your tears...
I took the darkness away,
But it's all my cries that now I hear...
And you were never mine,
But yet you always kept on lying...
Yeah this pain was meant for you,
And now you've left me here for dying...
And now you've left me here for dying...

 

This fear in my soul,
I never felt it before...
Always thinking of you,
Is burning me more...
There's storm in my head,
n all the pain in the store...
It cries out your name ,
But there are so many doors...

 

I gave you that smile on your face,
And took your pain with all the grace...
And I let you fly like a kite,
And you left me in this place...
But then you went away too far,
N I was waiting for all the night...
I kept on trying to bring you back,
With all the heart n all my might...
I kept on praying to the divine,
Hoping all the wrongs would change to right...
And you were never ever mine,
But yet you always kept on lying...
Yeah this pain was meant for you,
And now you've left me here for dying...
And now you've left me here for dying...

© 2014 Sanjh


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Sanjh
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Sometimes selfless love is not returned as selflessly as it deserves to be. And that brings on pain and a lasting sadness. You have done wonders with the expression of that pain here Sanjh. Life is not fair but it is all we have. Thanks for sharing your feelings.

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much Divya...:)
DIVYA

7 Years Ago

My pleasure Sanjh. Let's keep writing and sharing. :)



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I gave you that smile on your face,
And took your pain with all the grace...
And I let you fly like a kite,
And you left me in this place...
But then you went away too far,
N I was waiting for all the night...
I kept on trying to bring you back,
With all the heart n all my might...
I kept on praying to the divine,
Hoping all the wrongs would change to right...
And you were never ever mine,
But yet you always kept on lying...
Yeah this pain was meant for you,
And now you've left me here for dying...
And now you've left me here for dying…

Some lovely melody to this lovelorn piece. I have been here and few times and what you finally realize is romantic love is not meant to make you happy for long. It is about procreation. But if you are lucky the pair-bond is cemented with real undying love as well. Great write, Sanjh.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much Pryde...:)
This is sad but thoughtfully out together.

Well done!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much...:)
Really, I can see you're a beautiful soul.

You took on the greatest challenge: being taken for granted.

And you survived. That's remarkable of you.

"And you've left me here for dying" A line that has so much emotion. You could've just made a poem simply repeating this line over and over again.

I would've still have enjoyed it very much.

Amazing write friend.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

7 Years Ago

Thank you again, I'm glad you liked it so much...:)
If she was never yours she belongs to a frail sky, or the woods, or the winds of change...
If the man would say kindly he would kindly kindle love for a second, or for eternity...
Though it is vague the pain makes us greater, the pain of searching in frozen cloud matter.

Dear Sanjh, here my verse attempt continues, but for the sake of what is clearer I must address you here, by way of interjection. I apologize in advance for the form my review now takes.

One must lie to sleep, one must lay thee down, surely not me or I though always, if we
Place ourselves in the fragment...a hand shall come along and lift you up. The person
you seek will not be the person by whom you are found, though the woman is there
unrevealed and unknown. There is a woman there. There is another woman alone,
but it is a mystery who is found and who is allowed to be found. It is a mystery of children
and new birth too; of friendship of a circle and a worthy name, for each point of light in the circle,
the circle is a constellation and each star a whole entity, with love in their hearts, and no crashing
into one another...but cold matter is not ourselves but for an hour, a cycle of 12 hours, then another planet, then another building, then a home base, and who we choose to wait for but cannot if some others wait and they shall wait in the gate...

Posted 7 Years Ago


It is really nice! I can feel what you are trying to convey and that is the best part. It feels like it has happened to you as you prompt the idea so clearly. May God bless you! Great job, I must say....

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

7 Years Ago

you got it right. Thank you for the kind words...:)
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The poem is fantastic! It is one of the best poem I had ever read! Those word express your feeling and I can feel it when reading it :D Great job!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much, I'm honored with your words...:)
LuLuIcey

7 Years Ago

You are welcome ^^ I wanna try to express mines too
Sanjh

7 Years Ago

Sure, give it a try, I'm sure you will write a very special and touching poem...:)
You were able to express the sadness really wonderfully. You made a connection with the reader!
And I loved the last lines. They tell that the world is selfish. You give your whole life to someone and they just throw you away like nothing. It tells what pain someone can give by breaking your heart. Great writing! :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

7 Years Ago

Thank you for appreciating, I'm glad you liked it so much...:)
Pure, honest and true something which has dept of the sea

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

7 Years Ago

Thank you for reading, I'm glad you liked it...:)
The lyrics is beautiful. Amazing work Sanjh. The sadness in the poem is deep and could be felt. A strong and bold writing like most of yours. Magnificent. I loved it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much for appreciating brother...:)
I'm not exactly the one who can review song lyrics, hut I really like this. Since, the feeling of love, betrayal and heart break has been shown very well. This is definitely a personal song you had written for a loved one.
I hope you're fine. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sanjh

7 Years Ago

Thank you for reading, and I am fine...:)

thank you...:)

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