Questionably Questioned...

Questionably Questioned...

A Poem by DylanChase
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Chest-earner...

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Questionably questioned by the quest-givers
I'm a chest-earner
and I dig deeper to find lines that place my rhymes inside your mind tonight...
I'm a dark dragon seeking a stark mistress on a dime...
No warlock circle to burn on my skin
I am a sin of worthlessness in the lurch of learning magic whips...
I'm a laughingstock as the tablet flips tables of woe
Blows and throes...
I'm not Thor, no hammer and cord...
A zoid, I am moist...
Rejoice that my voice can transform transcribe describe...
Imagine the blight that will rise when they copy my hidden light
this time I'm "ite"...
Divine blind and now I free-grab rewind so the bee-line can define bright lies...
Behind enemy lines my wine is bitter like winter on the back of grime...
Slide your fines in the one-way ticket receiver and bide your brine so the wet can align with the vetting of your soul...
Whole toll is folded...
A paper-heart in a socket wrapped in a pocket
I'm on a rocket ship marked with lips like a dark kiss...
Wish I had no lisp but after today I wish the rips and wasp dips would leave me tossing and turning...
Needing grit...?
 Oh, you wish...

© 2017 DylanChase


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Powerful and worthwhile words my friend.
"Divine blind and now I free-grab rewind so the bee-line can define bright lies...
Behind enemy lines my wine is bitter like winter on the back of grime..."
The above lines were my favorite. The words hones and direct. My kind of poetry. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DylanChase

3 Years Ago

Thanks very much, Poetry... The bee-line really IS my favorite, heh... My kind of review...
Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.
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Wonderful as always, dearest.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Truly an enjoyable read,
I like the word choices and the flow of it all

A very delightful read, thank you.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Your words flow like a river, smooth and natural. You are a master poet, and this is one of your best. Great job.
-Richard

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DylanChase

1 Year Ago

Thanks so much! Sorry it has taken a minute to reply! Been away for a while. I REALLY like your flat.. read more
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I like this free version style when words and meaning are connected more naturally. Tone is quiet dark but don't put me down. More like floating above my reflection what i can see in your poem.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DylanChase

3 Years Ago

Thanks, Writer...! Nice to hear such a reflective insight...
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3 Years Ago

Yes i really enjoyed.
Bitter wine, i love this piece. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DylanChase

3 Years Ago

Thank you for reading...!
Great selection of words! I managed to picture some scenes like a mini movie clip!

Great work, keep it up!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DylanChase

3 Years Ago

What are movies, but words with sound built in, heh
Cecelia A. Green

3 Years Ago

I completely agree...
Bending twisting perceptions into a coherent magnum opus, nicely done. I think I like it.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DylanChase

3 Years Ago

Thank you, sir... I like your review, haha
Dream Weaver

3 Years Ago

You're quite welcome.. :)
Deep & powerful as usual 👍 it is what i call great job 👏

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DylanChase

3 Years Ago

Thank you, Nourhan
You always use such exciting imagery. Great work!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DylanChase

3 Years Ago

Appreciated, Flame, again, thanks!
Nora

3 Years Ago

Most welcome 😊

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DylanChase
DylanChase

Denver, CO



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