The Descent: Book one of The Descent Trilogy

The Descent: Book one of The Descent Trilogy

A Book by WitchyWiccan)0(
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An angel is sent to earth to convert and spread her faith. But what happens when she begins to doubt her own faith? A story of friendship, love, and true good and evil.

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I really enjoy where this story is going so far. I haven't had time to read the entire thing yet as I have been very busy, but from what I have read, it was very engaging from the start (at least to me) and I actually want to keep reading. I like the innocence of Clariana and how she is exploring and learning about the world she has been thrust into and her constant introspective view is great character development. Your main character has a well defined and dynamic personality, making her a very believable individual; for me that is the most important part of any story. Perhaps I am not quite far enough in to see it yet, but some of your other characters seem a little lacking in this department, but that's just how I am seeing it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

WitchyWiccan)0(

6 Years Ago

Which other characters are you talking about? The church characters or the other characters later on.. read more
warmachinerox

6 Years Ago

The other angels. They seem very present in the first couple chapters without really having a purpos.. read more
WitchyWiccan)0(

6 Years Ago

Yeah, i'll probably edit that. I'm better at 1st person.



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I really enjoy where this story is going so far. I haven't had time to read the entire thing yet as I have been very busy, but from what I have read, it was very engaging from the start (at least to me) and I actually want to keep reading. I like the innocence of Clariana and how she is exploring and learning about the world she has been thrust into and her constant introspective view is great character development. Your main character has a well defined and dynamic personality, making her a very believable individual; for me that is the most important part of any story. Perhaps I am not quite far enough in to see it yet, but some of your other characters seem a little lacking in this department, but that's just how I am seeing it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

WitchyWiccan)0(

6 Years Ago

Which other characters are you talking about? The church characters or the other characters later on.. read more
warmachinerox

6 Years Ago

The other angels. They seem very present in the first couple chapters without really having a purpos.. read more
WitchyWiccan)0(

6 Years Ago

Yeah, i'll probably edit that. I'm better at 1st person.

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Tags: The Descent, Angels, Demons, Wicca, Witches, Hell, Heaven, Lucifer, Satan, Azazel, Gaia

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Hello, my name is Nyxia Night, I am a Pagan High Priestess of the Lunar Night Coven. I am 18 years old, and live in hampton, VA. I write Short Stories, Novels, and nonfiction about myself and Paganism.. more..

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