border collie

you'll see

Poor bedraggled mutt
married the
Border collie
gotta run
so much fun
crazy circling
yapping
gotta go fast
gotta make it
last
come on
get up
let's do it again!
Poor bedraggled mutt
just couldn't keep up.

Author's Note

oh Gosh I am in for analysis on this one I am sure

Reviews

[TL Boehm]

we have border collie mixes. it is how it is with them. the rest of us mutts cant keep up.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks a lot. I appreciate it.

[Michael Stevens]

I couldn't help reading this one, as he title caught my eye. My ex wife and I had a border collie named Tasha; best, and smartest dog; still miss her!

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks so much. Yeah, in this story, the woman is the border collie, and the man is the mutt.:)

[Michael Stevens]

I don't think I like being called a border collie, that's a lot of brains to live up to!

[Daniel Sala]

That's funny, sounds cute on first read but could have more than one meaning, witty!

[Lucifer Jones]

This made me smile... being a mutt myself... A light and enjoyable view of the self and running ragged. Thank you for sharing!

[MichaelsLyric.com]

Nice, it sounds like the mutt is trying too hard. Pretty interesting piece, layered with sarcasm and irony.

[Cody Williams]

Another really good piece KL! Thanks for sharing it!

-CW

[FlatLineBeauty]

haha cute. could be taken so many ways. xo Winter

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

This must have been a fun write... nice work.

[Sami Khalil]

I owned one and heuse to herd my goat by touching the bottom of his feet. The goat will but him all the time. Used the gaot to eat my yard weeds and so forth. The are good dogs and energetic...I think they are Australian...Bravo

[Ruth]

Can be taken many ways, yes...but the essence is energy abound, I know that energy lol Beautiful flow! x