She will always be better.

She will always be better.

A Poem by Naomi Roseღ

  Everyone likes her.
  How could they not
  like her?
  Shes nice and
  beautiful.
  No one likes me.
  How could they 
  like me?
  I'm not nice and
  beautiful.
  Everyone wants to
  be like her.
  How could they not?
  She can dance and
  sing like a pro. 
  No one wants to be
  like me.
  But I don't blame them.
  She will always be better.
  I will always be worse. 

© 2011 Naomi Roseღ


Author's Note

Naomi Roseღ
Just some stupid jealousy teenage poem crap..IDK

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I like this though. You bare your emotions for the world to see in such a raw way that no one can help but to feel. This was not crap.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Each of us have a talent. I cannot sing or dance. I'm organized and can make people laugh. I believe people do what they need and want. Not everyone want to be a star and never know peace. I rather do good things and have time for peace and quiet. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


I agree with your arthor's note the poem shows that clearly sometimes we cannot jhelp feeling as we do toward another I become jealious very easily and it is indeed a crappy feeling

Posted 12 Years Ago


How could you think this? You are beautiful, inside and out. No matter what anybody says or thinks you are who you are and that makes you special. The light shines from your fingers and toes and with a brillant smile who could say no?

The poem was a wonderful read. And I enjoyed it. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


You're beautiful JUST the way you are. Just keep your head high and know you're better in many ways. I feel like this All The Time. Yet I always have people to bring my spirits up. If you want I could help you through anything. Peers should help peers go through rough situations.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Exactly...
Jealousy is all it is.
I'm not very fond of this piece, because it isn't really a poem. More of like just a bunch of opinions, and self-destroying lines strung together underneath a title.
It's not healthy to write loads of total bullshit like that!
So don't :)
Delete this, and make a poem saying how freaking amazing you are :)
GIRL YOU'RE AMAZING JUST THE WAY YOU ARE! (That probably wouldn't make much sense if you didn't know what song I was quoting...oh well)

Keep shining :)


Posted 12 Years Ago


ain't that the truth. made me smile that I found someone with the same point of view

Posted 12 Years Ago


very interesting

Posted 12 Years Ago


Its a good poem, i know the feeling. :( it sucks when people are better and your on the bottom of the "food chain". I'm at the way bottom, no one likes me or want to be me or with me. So this poem sounds like just another day. I really like it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Good poem. I think you did a nice job on this. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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