Prologue.

The prologue is here! Sorry it took long to write. And sorry for the shortness. The chapters will be better.

  I got the call when Leigh and I were done making love. Our hair was messy, our cheeks were colored red and our legs were still tangled with each other in the messy sheets. 

  Leigh's parents weren't home. They were at work. 

  Her blond hair brushed my bare chest and I asked softly, "how was it?"

  Leigh smiled up at me. "Perfect, Taylor," she tells me. Then she leans over and kisses me softly on the lips. 

   The whole thing was perfect. She was perfect. But I guess all perfect things have to end.

   My cell phone, which I put in my jean pocket (which was on the floor) started vibrating. 

   I sat up and moved over the the edge of the bed and picked up my jeans. I pulled my cell phone out of its pocket and it answered it without checking call display on the fourth ring.

   "Hello?" I asked the caller. 

    "Taylor," a stressed female voice replied. It was my Mom. "Something happened."

    I gripped the phone in my hand harder. "What happened?" I asked.

    "Something bad," she replied. "There was an accident. Are you at Leigh's house?"

Author's Note

Review please.
Do you think I should continue this book?

Reviews

[compositionc]

HELLS YEAH.
I love how it starts off, but you have a small grammatical error:
IN DIALOGUE-
"Taylor", You seem you put the comma outside the quotation, which doesn't really make all that much sense, but it should be:

"Taylor," The comma belongs inside the quotations.

[BeccaBelieved-]

YES!!! Continue writing it!!!

Very well written! Love it!

[halflives]

Yes, please. Very good beginning. I find myself hooked on what little to go in.

[Ronn Michael Salinas]

hehe, like yeah, continueee :)

[SheWhoWillNotBeNamed]

Why do you keep giving us just small parts? We want more! We are hungry!!!
I feel like you could extend all of this by even longer descriptions. The love making scene. I understand it's over, but maybe add more to it... Maybe how the room looked, what the air smelled like... You know... stuff. Yea, I like how it quickly jumps to action, but it makes me think that it might be better when described in more detail. Good start though!

[FaithfullyJennyBear]

I really really really wanna read more!! keep writing Naomi!

[TJ]

i liked the beginning and it seems to hop quickly into the action! i awesome this phone call will be the catalyst that starts the plot running! I might flesh out your protangonist a little more before getting into the action, gotta set the stasis, and the writing was intriguing enough to keep me interested without the quick jump into something happening.
i definitely think you should continue

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Yes, it seems almost playful, I for one would like to see this develop, well done

[Patches I'm not so new..]

I like this "lead in" whets the couristy and makes the reader want to know more!
whither you continue or not is your choice but I encourage you to do so.