Prologue.

Prologue.

A Chapter by Naomi Roseღ
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The prologue is here! Sorry it took long to write. And sorry for the shortness. The chapters will be better.

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  I got the call when Leigh and I were done making love. Our hair was messy, our cheeks were colored red and our legs were still tangled with each other in the messy sheets. 
  Leigh's parents weren't home. They were at work. 
  Her blond hair brushed my bare chest and I asked softly, "how was it?"
  Leigh smiled up at me. "Perfect, Taylor," she tells me. Then she leans over and kisses me softly on the lips. 
   The whole thing was perfect. She was perfect. But I guess all perfect things have to end.
   My cell phone, which I put in my jean pocket (which was on the floor) started vibrating. 
   I sat up and moved over the the edge of the bed and picked up my jeans. I pulled my cell phone out of its pocket and it answered it without checking call display on the fourth ring.
   "Hello?" I asked the caller. 
    "Taylor," a stressed female voice replied. It was my Mom. "Something happened."
    I gripped the phone in my hand harder. "What happened?" I asked.
    "Something bad," she replied. "There was an accident. Are you at Leigh's house?"


© 2011 Naomi Roseღ


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HELLS YEAH.
I love how it starts off, but you have a small grammatical error:
IN DIALOGUE-
"Taylor", You seem you put the comma outside the quotation, which doesn't really make all that much sense, but it should be:

"Taylor," The comma belongs inside the quotations.

Posted 12 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.




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I don't like the way it ended=[ I hate being left hanging. I'm for sure going to be looking for the other chapters.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great suspenseful start. Can't wait to read more.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is a good write...nice way to start it too...The last line was sad. I feel so bad for Taylor since he doesn't know what happened yet...can't wait to read on..so yes continue with this book. One more thing length doesn't always matter sometimes it makes you crave more. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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