Balm for the soul...

Balm for the soul...

A Poem by Frieda P
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Thou art the skies, my vast ocean,
        sanctuary
 in the night's pitch dark
  quietude like the flutter
               of butterfly wings
 roar of the sea when need be,
wildflowers of my bloom
            in wanton prayer,
     envelops solitude's endearment
   balm for the soul,
                    a dance within spirit
frivolous enjoyment
                    of shared laughter,
   satisfaction
              in the hours of stillness,
surrendering  
 anticipation's expectations,
 lifted to a higher plane
            of Utopian gratification
      centering 
                                my euphoric quest 


© 2014 Frieda P


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The poem is amazing and beautiful. It felt like silence prayer and thoughts. I like the places and thoughts I was able to feel from the very good description. Thank you dear friend for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Thanks so much John, I needed the balm myself on this day...



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Frieda, this poem is amazing. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Frieda, you've just hit another one out of the park and into my favorites folder. This is how I feel in the quiet solitude of my church parish. There is a special healing quality, a "balm for my soul" that can be found there. This music matches what we play at mass on the organ...and it is probably my favorite place in the world. All my friends are there, my meditative, spiritual place is here amongst the music...and the music is sensational. How do you do it?!

Posted 6 Years Ago


This is quite pretty. It's one of those poems that makes me wonder if I could write something like it, but I probably can't and if I did, it wouldn't be genuine. Thanks Frieda. I really liked this one

Posted 6 Years Ago


There's a melancholy air, about this poem, I don't experience from your other poems. In the beauty of your words and layout of them. Recalling memories, long silence by everyday life, but still able to bring a smile, on those days, which a simple gesture speaks louder than words can. Thank you, Frieda, for sharing this poem, with us.

Posted 7 Years Ago


An exquisite, soothing piece. Well penned

Posted 7 Years Ago


Ooooo sounds like someone had a great time.

Posted 7 Years Ago


You imbue sadness, the darker ink so well but when you are light - it is also beautiful

Posted 7 Years Ago


you imbue the sadness, the darker ink so well - but when you are light - it is just as beautiful

Posted 7 Years Ago


I love this. Just love it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Firstly, the music inspired me to write something, ahaha. I'm sorry, I didn't mean for that to happen but it brought back memories, plus, our conversation just now sparked it - so it might not be the best and I think you can guess it'll already be touchy and depressed. HA!

Secondly, this poem was out of this world amazing. Can I have some of this, thanks. ;-) I loved this, I think T H I S is my new favourite of yours. Damn girl, this hit the jackpot for me. xoxoxo

Posted 7 Years Ago



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