Poem 17. My Promise

Everybody deserves a second chance. If you had forgiven others, you must forgive yourself, too. Try to become a better person.

I am soaring, yes I am soaring
How could I fly yet there's no wing?
I am soaring, I am flying
Up so high like an eagle.

Yesterday, I am just sitting there
So compliant of what they say
Oh, I am so afraid to disobey
I am just a little puppet then.

Today, I am alone but respected
I respect myself as unrestricted
I can do what I want in liberty
I am free, I am so free.

Tomorrow, I'll be the one
The promise that I've always pine
I'll be who I am, I'll do my best
I'll be myself, that's my promise!

Author's Note

Just like to write something with rhyme. Any feedback is welcome.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Real love allowed us to be without walls and free to be what we need.
"Today, I am alone but respected
I respect myself as unrestricted
I can do what I want in liberty
I am free, I am so free."
The above lines are true. We must escape fake prisons and know the flight of the free birds. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, CP.

[Saddam]

I'll be who I am, I'll do my best
I'll be myself, that's my promise!
this is your promise to being a free bird and want to fly in sky, very high. love your thought.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks. =)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Beautiful expression of freedom in its new avatar!
you!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

thanks :)

[DIVYA]

Though you could work just a little bit more on the rhyming, it's a lovely poem on freedom and liberation of self. Shackles only restrict when you let them. I like your thoughts!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Yah! I just play on that. I'm not too serious on that poem. I just had nothing to write before I log out that time.But thanks for the appreciation.