Spit And A Spat

Fight between husband and wife! (Creative Poetry Group)

 

Symphonic mouths spill cruel words that

ricochet back and forth.

Daggers go deep into the abyss of hearts

where angry crimson blood pools.

Curt attitudes become a hurricane,

demolishing vows taken.

Pretentious eyes glare at one another.

 

Apprehension moves in as he walks out.

Emotions burst like a dam.

Her life swings from a pendulum of misery.

His absence tangle with the fear of forever.

 

Anger becomes an inferno of hot tears.

Thoughts grasp her brain.

Reality sets in.

Will he come back?

 

Doubts speak through a metallic

intercome of worry.

Her being is capacity of remorse.

Words he still loves me becomes her repetition.

Coherant fades as time passes.

 

She dresses in his shirt.

His scent causes a hypnotic state.

She wraps his sleeves of embrace around her.

Unearthly dreams fill her slumber.

Will he be back?

 

Lights intrude the darken room.

They meet at the door of forgiveness.

Their bodies silhouette into one.

Love is stenciled in the lining of their heart where forgiveness ignites.

Author's Note

Tell me what you think!

Reviews

[Bridget Mcmaken]

I really love this poem. it's just amazing and I love the feel of it. It's breath taking. This is a really wonderful/ amazing write. thank you for sharing your work!

[Poeticadia]

Powerful word choices and wonderful imagery in the last stanza! Great writing here!

[Poetic Beauty]

This is romantic and beautiful. We must be careful of the words we use in anger for the can hurt and do destroy things. My heart today feels like the chilled relentless drizzle that is falling from the sky so the happy ending of this poem lifted my spirits slightly.

[Tina Kline]

Wonderful write. I'm glad it has a positive ending as that's the best way for disagreements ought to end between people in a relationship. I really enjoyed this, great use of the words.

[patricia]

I thought this was really good. There were many excellent lines. My favourite was..They meet at the door of forgiveness. Thanks.

[Wolf's Dark Song]

Forgiveness is everything. I think this is a very well written poem, very enjoyable and tells a positive story on forgiving.

[?]

wow, awesome
They meet at the door of forgiveness... This line says it all. If this was the only line in the poem it would still be awesome. To manny let pride get in the way of forgiveness. Love is love and if there is love there will always be forgiveness.
This was such a wonderful piece
Thanks for sharing with me

[Cherrie Palmer]

..They meet at the door of forgiveness.... wow !

[Brad]

this is your best one by far! i ran my eyes through this one twice! nice to see the other side of an argument

[Dream Weaver]

Creative title and a perfect alignment of
words that burrow deeply in these two souls.
You just keep getting better and better Kathy
great work :)