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Complete Man

Complete Man

A Poem by Canicus

A man of complete love
sees not the true cruelty of this world
only the beautiful part
the one that has crystallized and pearled

A man of despair
is blind to the bright rays of sun
just glances at the horrid truth
look right at the damage that has been done

A man of peace
justice, is someone they've never met
let the wrongs that have been done slide
revenge, you will never get

A man of theory
can't see the element of surprise
never goes unexpected
always tactical, but never sudden

A complete man utilizes all
a mixture of heart, mind, mercy, and bronze
looks at a whole instead of a piece
knows how to use both pro's and con's

© 2012 Canicus


Author's Note

Canicus
enjoy, tell me what you think.
I think it might be kind of cool to see what you can add on to this, so I encourage you to leave comments including something of your own creation that'll fit.

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Nice job! Love it 100%

Posted 8 Years Ago


I think this is well written and very clear the effects our dispositions in life render our character that it reaches out to others, your structure is wonderful. I really enjoyed this poem. A truthful portrayal of mankinds virtues, strengths and weaknesses and their affects.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Its amazing. Love it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


awesome poem dude, it is greatly put and is absolutely true as a whole

Posted 8 Years Ago


INTUITIVE, my first impression and may this evil world never break any spirit of yours. Your words speak honesty therefore I hold onto the belief you are going to stand strong. You have a descriptive writing style that packs no punches. It's raw and honest

Posted 8 Years Ago


Interesting title. As for the poem...
I love the first stanza, so nice and real.
Love the descriptions of despair in stanza two.
Interesting descriptions of theory... really like that stanza as well.
Love the ending stanza... such a fitting real write. Very nice, enjoyed this a lot.
Your color and words that stand out as a highlight of each stanza showing what the stanza is for, so nicely done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


WOW this is truly breathtaking uh wow just wow.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Very nice, I really don't think anything else needs to be added. Your thoughts are perfect as is.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wow, Joshua! I'm thoroughly impressed with this poem. It's really good and interesting. I think it's good when someone sees life with a whole understanding instead of just a piece. Like you explained the very last stanza. Sometimes it gets so hard in life to see both the pro's and con's. If someone can do that, then they deserve an award or something! Haha. This piece held my attention throughout the whole time, and had me thinking the whole time too. I tried to decide what category would I be considered. Haha! Well, great job for sure! Keep writing, you're talented! You have a gift, remember that!! :)

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


very nicely written indeed..a complete and clear message.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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