CHAPTER 3 -The Free Fall

CHAPTER 3 -The Free Fall

A Chapter by Marc Marlon Villaflor
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Where have all the boys gone-An action/Drama Book of Marc Marlon Villaflor

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 22:00 Hrs. GMT A stealthy combat aircraft flying fast at high altitude preparing for the mission. The aircraft camouflage in the air, perfectly evading radar detection in the international air space.

Joseph and the rest of the young soldiers are preparing for the free-fall.

All of them are busy aside from Ryo and Lau; the two were busy in flying the aircraft.

 Ryo is a Japanese young soldier who specializes in air combat; he has distinct skills in flying the aircraft. A well trained combat pilot. master in lethal air fight.

Lau is a Chinese descent young soldier, he is an aviation expert and in charge for the seamless air operations of the group.

Ryo and Lau focus to the air operation that would start in 15 minutes.

Joseph prepared all of his gears included the high powered armament. One by one he mounted the gun into his gears bag, he took the 45 caliber pistol and put it to the holsters attached to his thigh.  He also kept some lethal blade.

“Eagle 101, can you hear me?” a voice from the mission control communicating at the group.

“Yes Father, I hear you over,” Joseph replied.

“Alright soldiers, I want you to focus on your mission, Eagle 101 just lead the team according to plan, destroy the subject and pull out!” The Priest ordered.

“Copy, roger that,” Joseph ended the communication, he look at his team.

“Alright we are here. We should stick together, cover and protect our partner to avoid loss, deal soldiers?” Joseph asked his squad.  

“Strac! (ready to rock and roll)” said the rest of the boys.

“What’s up Bro? You look sad,” asked Joseph to Kamal.

“Nothing Bro. I am thinking about our mission. This is our first combat, I am here to fight, I am always ready,” Kamal said to Joseph.

Kamal was always doubtful, Joseph knew it very well. When they were small Joseph always protect Kamal from the bullying of other boys.

Kamal though always uneasy he is lethal in combat. The Arab African soldier is a champions in Aikido and other form of martial arts. He is an expert in computer technology, programming and engineering, he can open vaults, maximum security doors and he can easily breach security system protocol.  The boys usually called him a lethal nerd.

“Cheer up Bro. I am here, I am your partner, nobody can hurt you as long I am here standing by your side,” Joseph assured.

Another young Arabian soldier is busy configuring his Digital Pad. This young lad name is Ahmed originated from Arabian Peninsula.

Ahmed is a smartest and deadliest person in the group of young soldiers. He is an expert in explosives; he created and designed the explosives needed in operation. It is a customized explosives, sleek in design and easy to carry.

The explosives fully controlled by Ahmed through his Digital Pad. The Digital Pad was successfully design by Ahmed with the great collaboration of Kamal.

“ Otoko no kyudai Anata aru junbi taishite datta?”  Ryo shouted in Japanese language, he means brothers are you ready for war?

“Alright let’s f**k the b***h in the desert!  said Nikolaus. Nikolaus is a German blood soldier. Very vociferous, he is the sharp shooter of the squad.

22:15 Hrs GMT

“Soldiers we are approaching to the subject, get ready,” said Ryo.

The cargo bay opens and the soldiers one by one makes a free fall.  

“Asta lavista baby,” Carlos shouted and he jumps into the air.

Carlos is a latin young soldier, a brave combat partner of Marcus.

Both are trained well as a member of assault team in this squad, they both lethal in combat.

Yuri and John left the cargo bay as they follow their team.

“Bro.  Let’s breaks some bone,” Joseph told Kamal.

Joseph jumps in the air accelerating into the sphere.

“Kamal, come on!” Ryo shouted.

“Alright!” Kamal hurriedly jump out to do the free fall.  Lau is closing the cargo bay after the last soldier progression.  

 

 



© 2013 Marc Marlon Villaflor


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Ths is good. I'm just not a hundred percent on the names...Rio could be respelled as 'Ryo', that makes sense. As for Nicolai...Nicolai is a Russian name. So, he should probably be Russian. Or, if you want him to stay German, name him Nikolaus. I think that's an equivilant...and 'dessert' is spelled 'desert' one 's'. Other than that, you did a terrific job! Very, very believable :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

lol :) I forgot to double check the word dessert  Thanks Ana I appreciate your good review, I sh.. read more
char

11 Years Ago

Nice!! Good work!! Look forward to more!
Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

Yeah I am working on chapter 4, I am still writing. I have some initial upload for that. The Blood .. read more



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Marc, was that "hasta la vista" which means goodbye?

Nice pic. Effort, huh!

Nice chapter. :)

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Marc Marlon Villaflor

10 Years Ago

Yes I think :) heheh Thanks Dhaye.
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Pax
very nice and well narrated ~ so i could see they were specially chosen because of their high skills at their early age ~

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Marc Marlon Villaflor

10 Years Ago

Oo :) at saka maraming twist kasi ang story sa gitna hangang katapusan. Kasi ang pina ka story nito .. read more
Pax

10 Years Ago

wow sinabi mo na dito yung plot line ~ lol ~ now i know ~ hehe ~ bakit naka unpublished yung dalawan.. read more
Marc Marlon Villaflor

10 Years Ago

di ko pa kasi naayus to gagawin ko uli to pagdating ng bahay para maka concentrate ako sa editing ng.. read more
This gave more details of the characters and clarify what all this is about. Good one.

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Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

lol Ok Junert thanks :)
Junert

11 Years Ago

Lol
Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

:)
Ths is good. I'm just not a hundred percent on the names...Rio could be respelled as 'Ryo', that makes sense. As for Nicolai...Nicolai is a Russian name. So, he should probably be Russian. Or, if you want him to stay German, name him Nikolaus. I think that's an equivilant...and 'dessert' is spelled 'desert' one 's'. Other than that, you did a terrific job! Very, very believable :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

lol :) I forgot to double check the word dessert  Thanks Ana I appreciate your good review, I sh.. read more
char

11 Years Ago

Nice!! Good work!! Look forward to more!
Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

Yeah I am working on chapter 4, I am still writing. I have some initial upload for that. The Blood .. read more
Hi I am open for critics, I just want an honest review. I welcome bad or good review.

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Added on March 17, 2013
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Marc Marlon Villaflor

DIFC Dubai International Financial Center, Dubai City, United Arab Emirates



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