Puck's Last Breath

Puck's Last Breath

A Poem by Marc Marlon Villaflor
"

Fairies cry whey they heard Puck dies.

"

Pick puck in prairie  

Spring brings nothing but dreary

Fairies cry, puck dies.

 

© 2013 Marc Marlon Villaflor


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This was nice. Short and quaint. Keep writing Marc

Posted 9 Years Ago


Love Puck. :) Nice poem!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Where is this picture from? I really like it. It's really creepy, sort of. The alliteration in your first line really helps the poem flow, and I like that, and I also liked your unique rhyming pattern, it really adds a clever touch of uniqueness to your poem. I sort of giggled at your description- and sorry, again, I can find nothing here to help patch up. It's probably because I'm getting around to these reviews so late. I've been busy, sorry I couldn't get around sooner. And, as usual, nice job.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Marc you are on your way to great work. Keep moving towards your dreams, no one can stop you but you.
~ With love Your friend Resnera.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

9 Years Ago

Thanks Res, I really appreciate it friend :) thanks a lot love yah!
Terohime

9 Years Ago

^^
Marc Marlon Villaflor

9 Years Ago

:)
I am just writing for a month and no background in the world of poetry. Hope you will always share your wisdom and correct my mistakes as I need it to solidify my dreams to write. Thank you, I love you all.


Posted 9 Years Ago


Nice and Sweet :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

9 Years Ago

Yeah :) I like this also :) I play hard with Puck lol :)
A sweet little write Marc

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

9 Years Ago

Thanks Mr. John, thanks for the support.
Well done, this! A fanciful twist - good job!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

9 Years Ago

Thanks Ms. Rita your words is always my inspiration :)
Very original and creative...
So sweet and sad...
Loved the artwork!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Marc Marlon Villaflor

9 Years Ago

:) Thanks Div :)
DIVYA

9 Years Ago

:) welcome Marc!

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Marc Marlon Villaflor
Marc Marlon Villaflor

DIFC Dubai International Financial Center, Dubai City, United Arab Emirates



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I am just writing for almost 2 months now and no background in the world of poetry. Hope you will always share your wisdom and correct my mistakes as I need it to solidify my dreams to write. Thank y.. more..

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