Puck's Last Breath

Puck's Last Breath

A Poem by Marc Marlon Villaflor
"

Fairies cry whey they heard Puck dies.

"

Pick puck in prairie  

Spring brings nothing but dreary

Fairies cry, puck dies.

 

© 2013 Marc Marlon Villaflor


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This is very whimsical. :)

Great wording in three lines.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

9 Years Ago

Thanks Rogue :) your words is always an inspiration :)
impressive Senryu poem well thought of

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ency Bearis

9 Years Ago

it is a Senryu, meaning it is a format of 7/5/7 syllables the same as Haiku. What's the difference ?.. read more
Marc Marlon Villaflor

9 Years Ago

Thanks lol actually I dont have a good background in Haiku I will be glad if you share your work so .. read more
Marc Marlon Villaflor

9 Years Ago

Aha so this is not Haiku? it is a Senryu?
This shorter poems are much more interesting.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

9 Years Ago

Thanks Sis :) your always an inspiration
Charming, ha, only in fairy tales does the mischievous one get it in the end!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Haha I wasn't saying! ;-P Hey it's good that we get our act together right? Just don't pick on me p.. read more
Marc Marlon Villaflor

9 Years Ago

Yeah lol :)
Frieda P

9 Years Ago

xD
Very cool Marc. I have seen this artwork somewhere before. I like your flow in this.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

9 Years Ago

Thanks Mr. Jack I am just fascinated by Puck the male Fairy.
Notwithstanding the death theme, it's a delightful read. nice kabayan.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

9 Years Ago

Thanks Gab :) I appreciate your time reading my work.
I like fairies and prairies. Good imaginative write...:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

My pleasure . Any time...:)
Marc Marlon Villaflor

9 Years Ago

:)
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

^^~^^ :)
Maybe 'Puck's Last Breath.' Could spend a long time on this. Not sure about 'pick." Does line 2 run on to line 3? No work for you today?

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

9 Years Ago

Yes thanks for the reminders I missed it :) I have work but I am doing multi task :) lol
facinating...kinda fairie oriented

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

9 Years Ago

Thanks Gom, you always amazed me with your words :)
not enough blood mentioned

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

9 Years Ago

Thanks Mike I want it to be a cute death lol :)

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Marc Marlon Villaflor
Marc Marlon Villaflor

DIFC Dubai International Financial Center, Dubai City, United Arab Emirates



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I am just writing for almost 2 months now and no background in the world of poetry. Hope you will always share your wisdom and correct my mistakes as I need it to solidify my dreams to write. Thank y.. more..

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