Puck's Last Breath

Fairies cry whey they heard Puck dies.

Pick puck in prairie  

Spring brings nothing but dreary

Fairies cry, puck dies.

 

Reviews

[Rogue]

This is very whimsical. :)

Great wording in three lines.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Rogue :) your words is always an inspiration :)

[Ency Bearis]

impressive Senryu poem well thought of

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Ency :) just try doing this Haiku :) thanks for the reads. :)

[Ency Bearis]

it is a Senryu, meaning it is a format of 7/5/7 syllables the same as Haiku. What's the difference ? Senryu - the sataric thoughts is with regards to emotion - likethe one you wrote puck dies, a sad thought. An Haiku- describing or illustrating in words the nature. I had so many of those Senryus and Haikus, next time I'll post some it here.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks lol actually I dont have a good background in Haiku I will be glad if you share your work so that I can check it as reference thanks a lot :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Aha so this is not Haiku? it is a Senryu?

[Junert]

This shorter poems are much more interesting.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Sis :) your always an inspiration

[Frieda P]

Charming, ha, only in fairy tales does the mischievous one get it in the end!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Frie lol yeah I just make a twisted end for Puck lol :)

[Frieda P]

Ha you have poetic license to do whatever your little old heart desires ;-p

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Yeah :) I trying my best in this Haiku I wish the Haiku Police will not catch me and busted me hehehe.

[Frieda P]

HA! Yes you have to watch out for them and the Grammar Nazi's too! ;-P

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Yeah Mr. Gerald Parker is one of the Grammar Nazi's :)

[Frieda P]

Haha I wasn't saying! ;-P Hey it's good that we get our act together right? Just don't pick on me personally and you get to live. ;-)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Yeah lol :)

[Frieda P]

xD

[Jack...]

Very cool Marc. I have seen this artwork somewhere before. I like your flow in this.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Mr. Jack I am just fascinated by Puck the male Fairy.

[gabrielle]

Notwithstanding the death theme, it's a delightful read. nice kabayan.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Gab :) I appreciate your time reading my work.

[Sami Khalil]

I like fairies and prairies. Good imaginative write...:)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Brother :)

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure . Any time...:)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

:)

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)

[Gerald Parker]

Maybe 'Puck's Last Breath.' Could spend a long time on this. Not sure about 'pick." Does line 2 run on to line 3? No work for you today?

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Yes thanks for the reminders I missed it :) I have work but I am doing multi task :) lol

[gombeggar]

facinating...kinda fairie oriented

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Gom, you always amazed me with your words :)

[Mike Emil]

not enough blood mentioned

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Mike I want it to be a cute death lol :)