Puck's Last Breath

Fairies cry whey they heard Puck dies.

Pick puck in prairie  

Spring brings nothing but dreary

Fairies cry, puck dies.

 

Reviews

[Pete Langley]

This is pleasant word spinning poetry, Marc. P.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Mr. Pete :)

[Pax]

oh... a haiku... the police is hidding around... but you're all good! lol :D
Beautiful work!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Lol thanks Pax, yeah the Haiku police is always in the corner, it is good Dhaye is here to guide me. Thanks a lot for the reads Kabayan :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Artwork and poetry was amazing. Made the situation come to life. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Coyote :) glad you drop by :)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Nice use of alliteration.
Another good job!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

lol really, I am afraid writing a Haiku, too many Haiku police around the corner lol :) thanks for the reads.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Haha. Am I one of them? I hope I haven't give you any upsetting word. Haiku is a short kind of poetry, next to Couplet, but it does requires much attention when it comes to format because just what I said before, many poets stick to the traditional format of Japanese poetry which for them is best (as I see in others works in books, etc). Actually, I am afraid, too. This is my 2nd time to make such kind of poem.
Before I forgot, you used not only alliteration here, but also assonance. A combination of two or more literary devices is really amazing. You're an amazing poet, Marc. You are very good in free verse, and even long poems in rhymes, so don't be afraid of Haiku. Let's just practice it putting all the thoughts in just 3 lines or more or less 17 syllables. Cheers!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

What I mean is, Restoration is my 2nd try to make a Haiku. :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks for the info Dhaye :) lol I am very thankful for your thought. just remind me if I crossed the board. You are a great poet too, cheers for all the writers!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Actually, you're one of my favorite writers here. To be specific, two of your works are my favorite: Stranger and Box Rain Dark. I really love them and I can't forget the music (which I downloaded) you used. :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

lol thanks Dhaye, you know I am struggling because some of my friends doesn't believe in this craft :) but to hear things like this, it made me a second thought to pursue this passion. Thanks a lot for the appreciation your words is an inspiration always. The music I always select it by my heart, I always put myself into the poem and hear this music to make it a perfect piece. :) Thanks a lot Dhaye.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

"... a second thought to pursue this passion." - Nobody should hinder us in our passion. Keep going.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Dhaye :)

[Mariam]

oh so nice!
But do not be sad...Spring brings beauty too :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

lol :) Thanks Mariam I just put some twist to Puck life and the Fairies. Thanks for the reads.

[Mariam]

yeah,I got it ) anyways...

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks again :)

[Mariam]

My pleasure

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

:)