Bye Bye

Bye Bye

A Book by Kaira_Writer
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Its about 9-year-old Christian Nicole.Her mother is an insane mental patient that escaped from the ins asylum.When Christian's birthday came around her mother shows up for her birthday.

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Hey, just to let you know, the word "insane" in insane asylum didn't entirely type. As another improvement to the summary, you don't need to give Christian's. mother's name in the summary as that will undoubtedly be revealed in the story itself. In the last sentence, stick to either present tense (comes instead of came) or past tense (showed instead of shows.) We definitely want a grammatically immaculate summary since a lot of people will instantly scroll past if they see errors- they will assume the story is the same.





The idea itself sounds intriguing! Looking forward to reading

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kaira_Writer

10 Years Ago

Thank you Cher for giving me corrections about Bye Bye and what I need to change.I will reread my st.. read more



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Hey keke, i read the first chapter. It is presented so simply. But i didnt get the story. Write more chapters and also do a lot of reading....ALL THE BEST..

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hey, just to let you know, the word "insane" in insane asylum didn't entirely type. As another improvement to the summary, you don't need to give Christian's. mother's name in the summary as that will undoubtedly be revealed in the story itself. In the last sentence, stick to either present tense (comes instead of came) or past tense (showed instead of shows.) We definitely want a grammatically immaculate summary since a lot of people will instantly scroll past if they see errors- they will assume the story is the same.





The idea itself sounds intriguing! Looking forward to reading

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kaira_Writer

10 Years Ago

Thank you Cher for giving me corrections about Bye Bye and what I need to change.I will reread my st.. read more

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