Indigo

Indigo

A Poem by moog-drika
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I don't know why I love playing with the sky so much :3

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The sky was caramelized,

to produce a discerning mirage on its skin.

The breeze was crispy:

it added a fierce flavor to the scenario.

 

Mouth of that ravenous seashore was filled

with layers of licit ocean.

It was not a vanilla reflection,

it rather had the skin of tender sky.

 

I tried to make a drawing of their subtle conversation.

With a brittle heart, I sighed.

Damn! It was heavy.

© 2019 moog-drika


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Do you love to see the indigo sky? I love it when the sky seems so clear without any cloud obstacles and it feels like as if the sky reaches somewhere more higher than it is...and the blue colour of it gets deeper....but can't look at that scene for too long since it hurts my eyes and neck....but I love to gaze at that! (Being silly, no? )
I actually love the first two lines of the second stanza...who else could paint it that way like you did!....I'll tell you why i feel the oceans are really illicit, because they can and do invade any place and connect to thousands of rivers....and none can stand against them....we've let them roam so free!....
Oh you made me say so much today.... I literally thank you for writing this....
Be blessed and cool and safe and happy, always ;)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

moog-drika

2 Months Ago

Umm, well are you talking about the comment or the poetry? Haha
rashmi

2 Months Ago

Poetry ofcourse 😊
moog-drika

2 Months Ago

Haha thank you so much ❤️❤️❤️



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That first line is dynamite. Boom it goes off and has the reader wondering what could be next after that awesome intro. Beautiful lines and I'm a fan of your work. Well done.

Posted 1 Month Ago


moog-drika

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts as well as for the compliment. The piece sometimes makes.. read more
This is beautiful,
thanks for entering this into my competition, good luck

Posted 1 Month Ago


moog-drika

1 Month Ago

Thanks so much! ❤️
Beautiful painting and wonderful words dear poet. The sea and the sky. True artwork for us to cherish. I loved how you described the clouds. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Month Ago


moog-drika

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much for the praise. It means a lot.
Coyote Poetry

1 Month Ago

You are welcome my dear friend.
Oh how I hate it when I cant portray something well enough to give it justice like a painting or a poem it is only a facsimile of its true reflection sometimes I feel as if this is the never ending sentence of an artist but we still must try

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

moog-drika

1 Month Ago

There are such poetry and painting that doesn't need words to explain but needs what we feel about i.. read more
Short but is written with some mesmerising effects... Fair emphasis is paid on nature and could have involved that part in loud character.., Random and deep emotions are showcased very well in this piece... Wonderful write... Keep writing !!

Posted 3 Months Ago


moog-drika

3 Months Ago

I love to talk about nature because it deserves all the attention and care. I am so glad that the pi.. read more
The poem is too deep for my small brain :v but you are a gifted poetess moog-drika

Posted 9 Months Ago


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likhon

9 Months Ago

Omg! Fellow Bangladeshi!!! Aren't you?
moog-drika

9 Months Ago

Yup :3 ...
This read like a dramatic painting converted into words... I was struck by your choice of words - the 'caramelized sky', the 'mirage on its skin', the 'crispy' breeze, the 'licit' ocean, the 'skin of tender sky'... your words created both the visual impression of the sky and the mood and atmosphere it stirred within you as you looked and sketched in words... Definitely one to hang in the gallery.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

moog-drika

11 Months Ago

It gives me such a pleasure to see you getting entertained through my thoughts and writeups. Your re.. read more
I read your replies below. Isn't it funny how the sky and nature become clearer when they're not around as much? It must be a desire that shapes ideas and images.

Great poem, moog.

Posted 1 Year Ago


moog-drika

11 Months Ago

I long for nature and sky and I am someone who is always up for the place that will show the plays o.. read more
Lovely imagery, but somehow I feel you are missing indigo sky and seashores. Some unfulfilled wishes I guess. Anyway Nicely written.

Posted 1 Year Ago


moog-drika

1 Year Ago

one of the major disadvantages of living in town with full of buildings and skyscrapers. I miss natu.. read more
I remember a dialogue of the movie Robot 2.0 "This is beyond science"

Posted 1 Year Ago


moog-drika

1 Year Ago

Haha Haven't watched it yet. So I guess I won't understand the meaning behind it? :3

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