Eventide

Twilight weighs lighter than daylight,

dreams to be fairer than a groaning night

of minty outlooks.

Painting itself with sober colors,

         it leaves a brighter attitude

triggering blue to exhale red,

         making the energy harlequin,

                            with a slight scent of dawn. 

After-effect observes how 

it lets violet twist with orange, how

it quivers peach and yellow,

just to underline its integrity and outshine popular hours.

Reviews

[Lisasview]

Again feel you words would be great as the beginning of a book..
Really enjoyed the read.
If you have time perhaps you could read one of mine.. perhaps.. Miles Apart to Hand~In~Hand
Lisa, now in Spain

[moog-drika]

Just checked this comment. Thanks a bunch for the positive words. Made my day!
I'll surely visit your pieces soon.

[Lisasview]

You are most welcome and I will be looking for your review..
Thank you,
Lisa, now in Spain

[Karmee]

love the imagery of your words
this is wonderful

[moog-drika]

thank you so much. It really means a lot

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Love the imagery of colors and scent and atmosphere. Wonderfully penned write. Tyfs

[moog-drika]

thank you so much. It really means a lot

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of words dear poet.
"Painting itself with sober colors,
it leaves a brighter fragrance
triggering blue to exhale red,
making the energy harlequin,
with a slight scent of dawn."
I loved the above lines. Thank you Moog for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[moog-drika]

Thank you so much for the positive words. So glad you love it. Means a lot

[Coyote Poetry]

I did enjoy dear Moog-drika and you are welcome.

[Melita Catalina Warren]

Excellent description as in all your work. I really resonnate with this one since I am a painter.read moreExcellent description as in all your work. I really resonnate with this one since I am a painter.
I can nearly see it!
Melita

mcw

[Fabian G. Franklin]

This was lovely. I enjoyed the contrast offered within the poem and the descriptive usage throughout. Good writing, F.

[moog-drika]

Thanks so much for taking a ride to the write. Made my eventide. :D

[Vari]

Imaginative poem with frame of nature and message of beauty thrills me. Enjoyed reading this masterpiece. Great to have an eye on this poem. I got to knew many new words and how to mix with so much ease of creativity. Thanks for sharing.

[moog-drika]

Thank you so much for all these positive words. They help me a lot to grow. So glad you love it. Made my eventide. :D

[Einstein Noodle]

i love this .. gave me chills to read .. love the blend of word paints and scents .. i can see this poet painting or this painter writing poetry .. a real gift either way .. thanks for sharing .. really like the "quivering" "groaning" "triggering" and the "exhale" ... love the ideas behind this poem .. very creative .. thanks for sharing Moog
E.

[moog-drika]

I really love the blend of word paints and scents. You may find most of my writes having the same essence :D Thank you so much for all these positive words and sharing your thoughts on my piece. They really mean a lot :'D :'D

[Just Kim]

I love the imagery in this write, this is a very well written piece here

[moog-drika]

Thanks a bunch. So glad you loved it :D

[Zephyr]

Graceful poetry. The imagery is simply refreshing. Glad I read this:)

[moog-drika]

Thank you so much for all these positive words. Made my day :D

[Relic]

Exquisite images in this. Your poem reminds me of my visit to Colorado years ago. You've detailed a lot of what I saw out there.

Great poem.

[moog-drika]

I wish I could enjoy it live. Writing about nature while being home is nothing but a pain sometimes.
Thanks so much for taking a ride to the write. Means a lot :D