Thy Will Be Done

Thy Will Be Done

A Poem by LunarSong
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"O my Father, if this cup may not pass away from me, except I drink it, thy will be done." Matthew 26:42

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Let my will turn to thee And my obedience made sure. Then I'll be able to see What I would ignore- Your Spirit's whisperings in my ear, The Spirit's quiet peace. I'll know you're ever near And will never cease.

Let my will turn to thee,

My obedience secure.

Help me to see

What I would ignore.

Help me to hear

Thy Spirit whispering.

I know you are near

Always listening.

© 2017 LunarSong


Author's Note

LunarSong
A poem I wrote late at night on sticky notes a few months ago. Hope that it brings inspiration in hard times. I stand witness that God loves everyone. Thank you for reading it. Please comment.
At the bottom is a new revision. Hopefully it's an improvement. Any comments welcome.

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words we all need to hear

Posted 2 Years Ago


LunarSong

2 Years Ago

Thank you. :)
 wordman

2 Years Ago

you`re welcome
Bravo! Short but profound. Well done!

Posted 2 Years Ago


LunarSong

2 Years Ago

Thank you. I think I'll put up the revision now. I'll just add it underneath. Hopefully it's better... read more
emipoemi

2 Years Ago

The musicality of the first version is lost, but the power and profundity has been amped up big tim.. read more
LunarSong

2 Years Ago

Thank you. :) I'm so glad that you liked it!
Lovely. :D

Posted 4 Years Ago


LunarSong

4 Years Ago

Thank you :)
MomzillaNC

4 Years Ago

yvw :D
beautiful piece.


"I'll know you're ever near
And will never cease"



Thank you for sharing.


God bless. Benita

Posted 4 Years Ago


LunarSong

4 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

4 Years Ago

you're welcome. :)
That's nice! I really like it. It makes you think, but at the same time has such a simple message! Great!

Posted 4 Years Ago


LunarSong

4 Years Ago

I know, so I was wondering if you did. Okay, I'll read it.
Farrsight

4 Years Ago

Fanks! I mean it!
LunarSong

4 Years Ago

You're welcome
Nicely done, Lunar Song. Short, concise and very to the point.

Good work.

Posted 4 Years Ago


PloughBoy

4 Years Ago

I know the feeling, my friend. My muse is relentless. ;)
LunarSong

4 Years Ago

Yes, if only it would wait for more convenient hours though. ;P
PloughBoy

4 Years Ago

Yes...if only.
That was great! I really liked it!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Alverrann

4 Years Ago

It kinda is.
LunarSong

4 Years Ago

Yep, they did it because the word is misused so often.
Alverrann

4 Years Ago

That's pretty sad.

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