A Chapter by Weeping Willow

this tells you the monster rules


Oita high school is not a normal school it teaches monsters. Monsters do have rules to follow, but they’re not as bad as the angel or demon rules. In this school many monster are different, but all monsters have wings. Monsters need their wings to survive, but wings aren’t what you think they are. There are really to types of wings, one is to be able to fly and the other is basically your opposite monster. If your second wing is killed (your opposite) is destroyed then you die as well.

Monster rules

One)         Never lose your wings

Two)         If you kill a human use a human weapon

Three)    Never tell a human about monsters

Four)        At the age of 17, all monster have to get the wings

© 2012 Weeping Willow

Author's Note

Weeping Willow
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Profound and intriguing story thus far, a school of monsters and all the rules that go with it, now that would be something to see... I look forward to reading the rest ;)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Posted 10 Years Ago

I love the concept. Monsters are beautiful,.

Posted 10 Years Ago

I bet this school would be a lot different from your average one ; )
Awesome idea

Posted 10 Years Ago

"Oita high school is not a normal school it teaches monsters." I think 'it' should be 'that' or maybe you should say 'Oita High isn't just a normal school, it's a school for monsters!' it kinda flows better^_^
"There are really to types of wings" 'to' should be 'two'
"If your second wing is killed (your opposite) is destroyed then you die as well." You don't need the is after '(your opposite)'
also you should put a little ':' after Monster Rules:D
Other then those the idea is good and it seems like an interesting story! I do suggest reading it out loud to yourself so that you can pick out any errors and fix some of the areas that could flow a tad bit better:) I do look forward to reading more and remember I'm here to help you and give advice and not everything I say needs to be taken to heart and changed/ messed with:)
Good write! keep up the good work!

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Weeping Willow
Weeping Willow

Dream land, Shelbyville, Australia

My name is Weeping Willow I am a girl, and I love to write. I’m not always good and usually get bored of something easily. I’m a little weird and far out when it comes to stories. Even th.. more..