Six Feet Down

Six Feet Down

A Chapter by Harley (arbiter)
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(Buried in the Ground)

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Noone listens till you're six feet down
Noone cares till you're buried in the grownd

And its too late to stop them now
You gotta die just to change the earth
Its a shame that we're wasted at birth

Wether it be war or peace
Roman or Greece
US or UK
Its the same all day

Noone listens till you're six feet down
Noone cares till you're laying in the ground

Ain't it a shame how the worlds turned out
So different from what god planned out
Noones to blame when we're all in doubt
So feed the flame wage war and shout

From Russia China to the U S A
Look at the lives people living today
And tell me if this was really meant to be
All the pain and the suffering
We live in a world of misery

Noone listens till you're six feet down
Noone cares till you're laying in the ground

Just take civil rights with M.L. Jr. king
When he was shot people started listening
They turned it all around
After his dead body hit the ground

I ain't got nothing else to say
I don't have the right to point out problems of today
I'm just saying what I think is the truith
I'm just adding my two cents too the toll booth
Yeah!

Noone listenes till you're six feet down
Noone cares till you're buried in the ground


© 2013 Harley (arbiter)


Author's Note

Harley (arbiter)
A song

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Damn arbiter you have some lyrical skills here. Really good flow easy to sing too,which I was actually doing,haha. Maybe space it out a little seperate your chorus from lyrics and BAM!!! LYRICS!!!! Good job....

Posted 7 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

7 Years Ago

thanks man
you seems to dealing with many negative perspectives and emotional strains through this poem, again I think you use language well and have a marked sence of struture, pace and delivery, as usual.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

7 Years Ago

Thank you
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Harley your sense of maturity is way beyond your age boy!!! Trust me on this one and take it as a compliment. I absolutely adore you for this poem, an amazing concept and the words sing so well. Fab. Guess this is your best piece :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

7 Years Ago

Thank you. It seems I'm growing up too fast xD I'm glad you liked it
PP

7 Years Ago

good luck matey:)))
People listen to you when you point a rifle at them.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

7 Years Ago

Yeah but then they run
Harley (arbiter)

7 Years Ago

And I don't think Obama has the balls to point a gun at someone... then again he doesn't have much t.. read more

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Harley (arbiter)
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I am different. I am the unforgiven. I was born october 1997. I just write because I want to express my feelings in more ways than music and art. I'm just a guy trying to get out of the rain and sur.. more..

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