Frozen

 

When we first met

your heart was frozen

but we felt a spark

 

Your heart started to melt and thaw

our love started to bloom

as a beautiful spring day

as the ice melted away

 

You reached out to me

like a vine in bloom

the warmth of my heart

melted your soul

 

As I nurtured you

our passion started to grow

the love melted your heart

as we became one with nature

 

I touched you,like the sun

touches a flowering bud

I touched your soul

and our love grew like a flowering rose...

Reviews

[Kaylor Mason]

Some romances are slow burning.

[wordman]

yeah i`m sure,thanks

[.]

Aww... This is so beautiful. I love the imagery. It's after a long while, I'm getting out of dark stuff. I loved this!

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[Laconic Meraki]

Absolutely love this. Sometimes I feel as though my heart is frozen... No emotion.
Then other days it's the complete opposite.. Maybe I'm crazy.
Love can either die like weeds or grow into a beautiful garden. Full of memories.

[wordman]

yes it does,thank you for the visit,and no,you`re not crazy

[Laconic Meraki]

I hope not lol

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Beautiful my friend and
Very romantic as always
I really enjoyed this
piece.

[wordman]

thank you again

[The Immortal Phoenix]

You make my heart sub-zero with this one. in a good way

[wordman]

glad you liked it

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'Frozen'
wordman,
I really life the cause and effect theme within this piece.
The title gives it's voice it's beginning..something brittle
and cold..needing warming and life.
It shows the confident awareness of honest giving
and an unselfish ability to see a change in another.
As in:
'As I nurtured you
our passion started to grow
the love melted your heart
as we became one with nature'
Blessings to you Ron.
Kathy

[wordman]

thank you kathy,you have a great perspective on poetry

[Kathy Van Kurin]

You too my friend! Keep it going Ron.Giving your voice..its good for all of us to do.
Kathy

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Such a romantic tale and that picture is quite something!

[wordman]

thank you john

[goldenscar__]

beaauutiful poem..... the woman is the best enigma to solve, don't you think?

[wordman]

lol,a never ending puzzle..thank you

[Sneh]

I'm sure this rose is free of thorns ....
Indeed your work is melting hearts of many.. Pure write, Mr. Man of words;)
Thanks for sharing! :)
Sneh

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[Sneh]

Pleasure :)

[Andre]

I really enjoyed this poem, that was amazing, as soon I started to read I knew it was gone be good, I like the way you worded it, just beautiful.

[wordman]

thank you for he visit