On Your Heart

 

  On your heart,

i will leave my print,

not a lot,

but just a hint .

 

You will think of me,

when the time is right,

lying in your bed,

on a summers night.

 

Or maybe i`ll come,

from a flickering light,

from a candle burning

inside your mind.  

 

Where i`ll be,

till the end of time,

tucked away in your heart

where we will never part...

Reviews

[barleygirl]

You probably know I'm a fan of rhyme & rhythm, so this poem really strikes a chord with me. I love V1 especially for the way it sounds, as well as for the playful snappy message. This doesn't strike me as a romantic poem (which feel forlorn & longing), but more like a sassy repartee, an offer of friendship, from this narrator to the object of his affection. Very enjoyable! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[wordman]

well you are right,and thank you

[Sami Khalil]

"Where i`ll be,

till the end of time,

tucked away in your heart,

and your soul,where i can love you for evermore..."

[wordman]

thank you sami

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome sir.

[Bonnie Paige]

Wordman you've been around for a long time and i'm sure you'll be around a lot longer. Everyone wishes their list love will linger in ones mind and heart till the end of time. Great poem.

[Sami Khalil]

" On your heart,

i will leave my print,

not a lot,

but just a hint ."

[wordman]

thanks for the visit sami

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome Wordman.

[R.E. Ray]

Love, hope and humility so eloquently and simply illustrated in your words and art. Striking poem and artwork, sir.

[wordman]

thank you mr ray

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Always such beautiful words you write...always touches my heart...🌹

[wordman]

thank you for reading

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

[wordman]

i will take that as you`re welcome

[Pryde Foltz]

These words begged to be sung. So beautiful, Ron:)

[wordman]

well,sing it pryde,,thanks

[Richard🖌]

Gosh, Ron 😳
You'll have all the ladies queuing and elbowing to be first in line, and all the gents envious of your romantic ways … that steal all the poetesses' hearts away.
This is sheer wonderment to the soul, My Friend, and the picture is perfection in harmony to your poem, as is Elvis … sheesh! You've done it all to a tee.
And, a nice rhythmic beat keeps the flow dancing right along.

You just keep getting better and better … amen. : )
Thank you for one truly inspiring poetic treat! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[wordman]

thank you my friend for the inspiring review

[Richard🖌]

Ya got it goin' jussst right, Ron!
You make poetry fun, interesting, and entertaining … it is I who thank You! ; )

[wordman]

just another love song as paul said,just another love song

[Richard🖌]

Aw,
It's a bit more smoothly fetching than that, my friend.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Word... you are a romantic renaissance man ...
a flickering light ... a candle burning in your heart
until the end of time. truly, Pat

[wordman]

thanks pat

[lovely.poets.]

beautiful! i've read this over & over wanting more each time. beautifully conveyed !

[wordman]

thank you for the comment