If i were a carpenter

If i were a carpenter

A Poem by wordman



Life without you,

i wouldn`t understand if,

you wasn`t my lady,

and i wasn`t your man.

 

my life wouldn`t be the same,

without you,

but the world,

wouldn`t either

 

you take my breath away,

you sooth my soul,

when we`re apart

my heart is cold.

 

one day,

i will build a cabin,

in the sky

where eagles soar

and we never die.

 

My lips are sweet,

my love is true,

and i give it all,

all to you...

 

© 2020 wordman


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I always admire the sincerity, humility and simple tone of your poems. I can hear Alan Jackson or one of the true country artists singing this in a dim concert hall, just his voice, a guitar and a white halo around his wood stool. Sure, Elton John, but I'd prefer the country version of this one. Another enjoyable work.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 wordman

4 Months Ago

thank you,i like allen jackson to



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Ah!!! The romantic side of Ron will always melt a woman's heart. A gentle, open and genuine piece.

Posted 2 Months Ago


 wordman

2 Months Ago

thank you john
This is absolutely a genuine beautiful piece of writing. A tender love story that moves the reader. Loved it..

Posted 2 Months Ago


 wordman

2 Months Ago

thank you,i guess love poetry was my calling
Ladysue

2 Months Ago

you write it well :). and thanks for the friendship.
 wordman

2 Months Ago

thank you ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
This is a thoughtful and tender way of expressing your love to another, wordman. The romantic tone fits the words like a bow. Nicely done.

Posted 2 Months Ago


 wordman

2 Months Ago

thank you very much mr relic
How mercy! Someone could melt just from reading your poem.

Posted 3 Months Ago


 wordman

3 Months Ago

i have 427
Diane

3 Months Ago

lol I guess my TBR just got a lot longer.
 wordman

3 Months Ago

yeap,get started
"My lips are sweet,

my love is true,

and i give it all,

all to you..."

Posted 3 Months Ago


Your poetry has always song quality to it. Simple, profound and romantic. You should be in Nashville signing contracts.

Posted 3 Months Ago


 wordman

3 Months Ago

lol,i wish i was sammi,,thanks
Sami Khalil

3 Months Ago

Yes siiiirrrr. You are welcome
I always admire the sincerity, humility and simple tone of your poems. I can hear Alan Jackson or one of the true country artists singing this in a dim concert hall, just his voice, a guitar and a white halo around his wood stool. Sure, Elton John, but I'd prefer the country version of this one. Another enjoyable work.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 wordman

4 Months Ago

thank you,i like allen jackson to
Very romantic, and capturing, the eagles in the sky, the visuals in this piece are classic, nice job!

Posted 5 Months Ago


 wordman

5 Months Ago

thank you for the visit
So tenderly romantic Ron - - a gem of a read.

Posted 5 Months Ago


 wordman

5 Months Ago

thank you fay
Beautiful poem, reminds me of the song Scarborough Fair. Lovely writing

Posted 5 Months Ago


 wordman

5 Months Ago

thank you for the visit my friend

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wordman

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just ask, golden glove boxer years ago,us army veteran ,a contractor is how i make my living, i am an amateur writer.. been here since june of 2013,couldn`t write then,still can`t.but who cares i .. more..

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