If i were a carpenter

If i were a carpenter

A Poem by wordman



Life without you,

i wouldn`t understand if,

you wasn`t my lady,

and i wasn`t your man.

 

my life wouldn`t be the same,

without you,

but the world,

wouldn`t either

 

you take my breath away,

you sooth my soul,

when we`re apart

my heart is cold.

 

one day,

i will build a cabin,

in the sky

where eagles soar

and we never die.

 

My lips are sweet,

my love is true,

and i give it all,

all to you...

 

© 2020 wordman


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I always admire the sincerity, humility and simple tone of your poems. I can hear Alan Jackson or one of the true country artists singing this in a dim concert hall, just his voice, a guitar and a white halo around his wood stool. Sure, Elton John, but I'd prefer the country version of this one. Another enjoyable work.

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 wordman

1 Week Ago

thank you,i like allen jackson to



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I always admire the sincerity, humility and simple tone of your poems. I can hear Alan Jackson or one of the true country artists singing this in a dim concert hall, just his voice, a guitar and a white halo around his wood stool. Sure, Elton John, but I'd prefer the country version of this one. Another enjoyable work.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 wordman

1 Week Ago

thank you,i like allen jackson to
Very romantic, and capturing, the eagles in the sky, the visuals in this piece are classic, nice job!

Posted 1 Week Ago


 wordman

1 Week Ago

thank you for the visit
So tenderly romantic Ron - - a gem of a read.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


 wordman

2 Weeks Ago

thank you fay
Beautiful poem, reminds me of the song Scarborough Fair. Lovely writing

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


 wordman

3 Weeks Ago

thank you for the visit my friend
This is such a most lovely as well as beautiful well written write


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 wordman

3 Weeks Ago

thank you for the visit
So beautiful and romantic Ron! You write of love so well my friend. ~Sharon

Posted 1 Month Ago


 wordman

3 Weeks Ago

thank you sharon,good to see you
I've read some of your poetry. What a beautiful declaration of love they are. I enjoyed reading them.

Posted 1 Month Ago


 wordman

1 Month Ago

thank you fo the visit and reviews
Beautiful poem.. You have a John Denver vibe.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Lale

1 Month Ago

I am Ok, thank you for asking.. looking forward to reading good poems again
 wordman

1 Month Ago

if i see any i will let you know
Lale

1 Month Ago

yes please, thank you :)
Beautiful poem...you are always such a sweet man and that comes through in all of your poetry. ...Bravo!

Posted 1 Month Ago


 wordman

1 Month Ago

thank you ellen for the visit
Does 'you' symbolize the job of carpenters here?

Posted 1 Month Ago


 wordman

1 Month Ago

who knows,thank you for the visit

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wordman

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just ask, golden glove boxer years ago,us army veteran ,a contractor is how i make my living, i am an amateur writer.. been here since june of 2013,couldn`t write then,still can`t.but who cares i .. more..

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