Kingdom of Dreams

Kingdom of Dreams

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
"

Experimental. Kind of dreamy ;p

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A blanket of stars 

on an ebony sky,

 

freshly mown grass 

on a bright rainy day

 

a carpet of - half made promises.

 

I walk on, miles and miles 

towards the sound 

of your distant roar,

 

echoing; tempting me forward --

 

I reach out 

to the confines 

of where we built our

 

 kingdom ~ of dreams.




© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



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You are talented my friend, and Your talent shines here so brightly! You know what You are writing, and how to write it to turn it to not just beautiful poem, but to a one filled with emotions dripping from Your words, sometimes like drizzle, sometimes like rain...

Posted 12 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

12 Months Ago

Thank you again for your lovely words, Light. I'm humbled at your appreciation. :)
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Beautifully written, with passionate nuances shown, and kept, way deep inside.

Posted 12 Months Ago


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Dr. YumnaKay

12 Months Ago

Thank you for your words. I appreciate it 😊
a112yearoldman

12 Months Ago

You are so welcome!
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I love this, YumnaKay. So thoughtful, and it does have a dreamy feel to it. I love the image you chose to accompany the poem as well—it fits. Overall, the poem reminds me of an old friend I wish I was still friends with. I guess it gives me a bittersweet feeling, but also a bit of sadness. Anyway, thank you for your beautiful words! :)

Posted 12 Months Ago


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Dr. YumnaKay

12 Months Ago

I had a friend in mind too when I wrote this so it's nice to know you had the same feeling.
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YumnaKay, if this is experimental ~ I say "keep 'em coming", for this is a gorgeous piece of writing filled with words of sadness, love and yes, even alittle hope.

This is my first visit to your page, but I'll be returning to read more of your offerings.

Thanks for sharing your words with us YumnaKay.

Blessings,
~ hsg

Posted 1 Year Ago


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heavenscentgirl1

1 Year Ago

You are very welcome YumnaKay ... it was truly my pleasure!
Katelynne Russell

1 Year Ago

I loved this piece it was beautiful. It wasn't just the title that caught my eye it was the words. T.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

I appreciate your words. Thank you 😊
Yes indeed very dreamy. After reading in my mind so many pictures are create. So well done .

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your words here 😊
Kingdom of dream can be magical but many times they fade into the distance. Loved the imagery and the descriptions in this piece

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

True, they do fade but can reemerge too ;)
Thank you for appreciating 😊
Poetic Beauty

1 Year Ago

That is very true
Reminds me a of these lines of lyrics; "Suddenly life has new meaning to me, there's beauty up above and things we never take notice of, you wake up suddenly you're in love." - Billy Ocean Lovely, poetical and heartfelt write ... excellent! :-)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

I'll have to check that song out ;)
Thank you for the lovely words and for appreciating, Phil.. read more
I liked the imagery. Beautifully written.

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Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Najam. I appreciate your words here :)
Najam Us Saher

1 Year Ago

You're welcome. ☺

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