I can't live without you

feeling of loss

I can't live without you.
how should i tell you
I can't live without you.

you don't even know my love for you
I am waiting for you.
you are my heart and soul
how should i tell you
I can't live without you

you live in my heart
but you don't know about the feelings
for you inside me.
you always make me cry

I live
i die
with you only
trust me..
I am waiting for you
you are my heart and soul..

how should you live breaking my heart
you always get woe of leaving me

my life is lonely without you
without you what should i do
I always become sad
this sadness breaking me out..
I am trying but this is not enough for me..

I can't control
I can't wait
I can't think more
I can't live without you..

Reviews

[thoughts of jade]

you don't even know my love for you
I am waiting for you.
you are my heart and soul
how should i tell you
I can't live without you

I love that... this is one great poem... I feel the emotions you put in this poem when you wrote this. I am definitely going to add this to my favorites.

[Where the night sky and..]

Another cute poem~

[♥Kaitlyn♥]

its good
I think you did a really good job with the mood of the poem :P

[Deviant Works]

The ending was absolutely perfect. This piece is a bit sad, full of longing and despair, but I think many of us can relate, myself included. Time and distance can be grueling, wearing someone down to a glimmer of themselves while they wait for love. Wait to speak those three little words which are searing holes through their very soul. It's as if your heart is twisting in your chest and all you can do is gasp for air while clutching your hand over what is left. Trying not to cry, to be stronger because you know you are. Great read, Akshat, and got me chattering away.:)

[Safe&sound<3 ♫]

it was good; i saw you used a lot of repetion in it. it can be used to get it engraved in the writers head, but i'm not a big fan of repetition... other than that (my own personal taste) it was good! and watch the grammar.

[Frantzuu]

A well executed concept. I knew what the poem was going to be about from reading the title and you did a great job with this piece. Thanks for sharing.

[?]

Very powerful and full of emotion.
Nice piece
Enjoyed the read

[littlelilypurplebride]

I agree with rose Isloved. lovely write thank you for your sweet review god bless lily

[Chris38]

This was a great piece indeed

[RJM]

Powerful peace of writing and the feeling was strong felt through the whole poem. Great write

[A]

I agree with Poetic Symphony about the his notes, but other wise this is a very powerful piece full of deep emotions, it describes true love, lovely.