I can't live without you

feeling of loss

I can't live without you.
how should i tell you
I can't live without you.

you don't even know my love for you
I am waiting for you.
you are my heart and soul
how should i tell you
I can't live without you

you live in my heart
but you don't know about the feelings
for you inside me.
you always make me cry

I live
i die
with you only
trust me..
I am waiting for you
you are my heart and soul..

how should you live breaking my heart
you always get woe of leaving me

my life is lonely without you
without you what should i do
I always become sad
this sadness breaking me out..
I am trying but this is not enough for me..

I can't control
I can't wait
I can't think more
I can't live without you..

Reviews

[thoughts of jade]

you don't even know my love for you
I am waiting for you.
you are my heart and soul
how should i tell you
I can't live without you

I love that... this is one great poem... I feel the emotions you put in this poem when you wrote this. I am definitely going to add this to my favorites.

[iamkim]

nice one!

This is so beautiful..I know this feeling only too well.

[trainwreck]

Nice little poem here.

[Rose Masen]

I love how your poems just flow so freely and beautifully. I think your bottling up even more talent, and your just not sharing. :P. Lol.

[Ian Faraway]

I have a problem with a few of the grammar issues and the context of "doesn't" in the tenth line... it doesn't fit at all maybe rewrite those two lines to say "you don't know about my feelings for you" or something. It'll flow a bit better. Hope I could help

[Linear]

Nice work my friend, how does it feel? keep on

[Ashley Myers]

such devotion. awesome write

wow!

[hannajade]

this is a great poem, but you should watch your grammar more carefully when you write. :)

[Jeff]

Great work here! We've all been here a time or two.