Revenge

Some times, earth revenge

No where to go:
Nothing to do;
No one to hear;
In the abyss of darkness;
Thunder and lightening
Raining heavily;
Flooding;
Heavy winds;
Lost hope;
Floating on a log
Time seems infinite;
A helping hand;
Strange it seems
Saw nothing;
Heard only roar of earth
Shaking each human destiny.

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Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

These lines remind me how mother nature can turn and bite hard when we least expect it. She can be as a gentle as a whispered breeze on a summer day or as viscious as a tsunami destroying everything in its wake. Thank you for posting. Nice poetic description.

Chris

[ArundassTP]

Thanks friend

[Light and Ashes]

interesting. like getting lost in your own personal storm. which I'm sure we have all done at some point. Human beings cant help ourselves at least from time to time.
This is, in fact, very good...

[Keith Jeffries]

I particularly liked the last two lines. Thank you for an excellent poem

[Novram]

Mother Earth is fighting back against man, because of all the pollution we cause and our destruction of the natural world. Good poem.

[William Michael Reeves]

The planet has good reason to be upset. And now tornados like just happened are going to more frequent. Nicely condensed gigantic idea!!
Bill

[ArundassTP]

Thank you friend

[Coyote Poetry]

Revenge. Earth can and it does. We take and take from earth. One day, she won't need us. I liked and I agree with your words and thoughts. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[ArundassTP]

Thank you friend

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Ghost/Gray]

Mother Nature so powerful, yet her touch can be gentle. Beautiful Poem.

[ArundassTP]

Thank you friend

[barleygirl]

I love your poem & how it reminds me of all the ways the earth is crying out, here in California where we've had really bad drought followed by horrendous wildfires. But I also read your poem as a statement about the number one terrorist threat in the USA -- racial violence. Those who feel dismissed & devalued are lashing out, just as mother earth lashes out becuz of our thoughtless domination. This poem invites a ton of intense interpretation (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[ArundassTP]

Thanks... Friend

[Betty Hermelee]

It seems like the weather is taking revenge upon your dark mood... loneliness, lost hope.
Very nice images.
Thanks for sharing
Betty

[ArundassTP]

Thanks friend

[Robert Trakofler]

In the west, we have a way of disconnecting ourselves from nature be it from social or societal conditioning this "disconnect" has a price, one that has a double edge cut it allows us to be less conscious of our environment in the actions we take and then it also makes us less conscious of our place within it... that we are a part of it, and as such we need to nurture it as we would any part of us. That is what your lines reminded me of

[ArundassTP]

Thank you friend