Darkness

Some short poetry.

1---   I touched her tattoos on the softness of her skin on her leg.

I tasted her skin and I whispered.

You are a wonder, a mystery and a miracle.

2---  My pretty gal, my softest touch.

You occupy my hopes and my dreams.

In your eyes, I feel warm and magically.

3---  Beneath those beautiful coffee brown eyes.

I can see glimpses of the sea, the sun and the moon.

You are my north star, allowing me know.

Love is safe and kind.

4---  Darkness can overtaked me.

The light of hope had fallen.

Once dreamer is sleeping.

When you want nothing.

What is left?

Dancing Coyote

Author's Note

Some words.

Reviews

[Vertigo Cat1111]

The feeling of love in this is raw and dedicated. Your choice of songs adds another deep layer, but your writing truly holds it all, nostalgia, the feeling of love, bittersweetness, and sadness. You convey all of these emotions in a way that continuously pulls you in with each piece you write. Thank you for writing so deeply and sharing it with everyone, and I have to say I love the comparison of coffee with brown eyes, that was so smart. My favorite line, though, is 'when you want nothing. What is left?' Beautiful piece, here!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend for reading and the comment. I try sometime to write short poetry. I appreciate the comment.

[Pryde Foltz]

"When you want nothing.
What is left?"

What a fantastic romantic write. In answer to your question ... turns out ... fulfillment and expansion:)

[Coyote Poetry]

turns out ... fulfillment and expansion:)-- First you must want them. Hello dear Pryde and thank you for reading and the comment.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I think what is left is your incredibly romantic poetry...

I read you and always hear Vince Guaraldi's "Cast your fate to the Wind"---
playing in my background...and I think of past loves...
j.

[Coyote Poetry]

Hello Jacob and thank you for reading and the comment. I appreciate the comment.

[Weeping willow]

Touches of the skin, leaves impressions in the heart that no one can replace the softness of love in its embrace ;-]. Nice

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree my friend. We need the human touch. Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Viktoria]

We all need something to bring us out of the darkness and that is where we ladies are always invaluable. Just our ethereal presence can bring light to any shadows. And so it is with you in this poem. Soft touches on feminine skin is your antidote. A romantic piece, Coyote.🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

The quiet moments between two people dear Viktoria. Create places where you can heal. The hands connecting with and when two fight as one. Magic. Thank you dear Viktoria for reading and the comment.

[Poetic Beauty]

Love can take us to many places and this is a sweet tale indeed

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my dear friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Relic]

Feeling this way is something we all wish would last forever. This is a nice dedication, Coyote.

[Coyote Poetry]

Hello my friend and thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate. I agree. We learn. Forever is myth and tale.

[Silmara McGarry]

Beautiful! Great choice of words and so romantically laid with not so expected end.
Well done!!!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear Silmara. I appreciate the comment.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

holy moley. It starts off so romanti and does a uturn into erie. I like that.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

On a side note I love your vhoice of songs

[Coyote Poetry]

I keep finding more music of Johnny Cash. I liked his new song better than his old ones. Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.