Perfection

From moist deep silent soil

An example of Nature’s perfection

Quietly, an intense beauty rises

As life receives a rose injection

 

The edge of each rose petal

As it blends with those round

Creates a symphony of perfection

As tho’ each blossom had been crowned

 

Exuding a fragrant sweet scent

Part of a kinship that survives

Its aroma a true treasure

Which enhances each of our lives

 

Author's Note

this is actually, a near perfect example of Agathokakological (ism)

Reviews

[Amy R]

What a wonderful little poem, I agree with Ana, 1st time hearing of this type of poem..
Thanks for sharing. enjoyed this read.
-Amy

[Dave Brown]

LOL
First time I've ever used it and only because my sister asked me why such a beautiful flower as the rose has such sharp thorns
It would probably also apply to blackberries which taste so wonderful but you hack your arm into a blood soaked mess when trying to pick them....!!
Cheers

[Amy R]

Oh wow, maybe that's what make them beautiful, the thorns, just like life being great but then obstacles , u get what i mean ya :)
I love blackberries too 😊

[Dave Brown]

yo bro (ette)

[Ana Papaya]

This is the first time I'm hearing of "Agathokakological".
So thank you for that and yes, I just googled it.
The poem is lovely of course. Beautiful descriptive language creates a visual appeal.

[Dave Brown]

that is quite the mouthful
thks 4 visit M. Papaya
n-joy ur eve