By Myself

By Myself

A Poem by Evelynn

Your hands holding hers
As you walk down the hall
The way you look at her
As if she was your all
I wish you'd look at me
Like there was nobody else
I wish you'd hold me tight
But I'm all by myself

© 2018 Evelynn


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So simple and yet so sweet. The loneliness, bitterness, sorrow, wistfulness. You can sense it all within those short simple words.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Strange how we focus on the aparent happiness of others when we are alone and sad. Often they wear masks and we do not know what happens behind closed doors or in their hearts. He may look at hewr with such affection but she may not give a damn. You express this well.

Posted 1 Year Ago


This poem is relly captures the heart and lets it go in ink. wonderful and sad at the same time

Posted 1 Year Ago


The taste of, the want of or the reality of, which is better.... not sure but id say in there own way they are all a delicious brew! Not the stuff of teenagers, but the stuff of life... in so far as a teenager these feelings become somewhat heightened to awareness. Those feelings remain static unless actions are taken and then the inevitable dreaded result occurs dive for thrive? or aloof for spoof? that is the real question dear Horatio... Very nice sentiment and wording here

Posted 1 Year Ago


Evelynn

1 Year Ago

Thank you!
Can I translate the poem into Hangul also good job love the poem better then my own. But hiding behind a poem my cause more problem I have done that for years and it never help me trust me. Also I would like you to look at my peoms plz.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Evelynn

2 Years Ago

Of course you can translate my poem into Hangul. And thank you so much, and trust me I know that hid.. read more
Rambone Campos

1 Year Ago

This sorrY took me so long to answer just a busy high schooler
This is such a powerful poem. It shows how much your feeling in such few words. I can also relate to this poem. Amazing job!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Evelynn

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
Beautiful flow I enjoyed it :)


Posted 2 Years Ago


Evelynn

2 Years Ago

thank you!
This says a great deal with few words. Simple poems offer wide interpretation. Some will feel the grass is greener, while others feel only a reminder of rejection. I think; this arose from deep feelings, therefore it brings out deep feelings in the reader. Some deep wells hold sparkling waters, while other wells hold only fire and pain.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Evelynn

2 Years Ago

Thank you.
This is a good effort, but it falls into a myriad of cliches.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Evelynn

2 Years Ago

Well, I guess that my life is a cliche then
sweet thoughts of love ,a teenager`s life

Posted 2 Years Ago


Evelynn

2 Years Ago

thank you!
 wordman

2 Years Ago

you`re welcome

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Added on August 16, 2018
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Roanoke, VA



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