Chapter III

Days have passed, so did the years.. and my condition kept on worsening until I found a way to manage the amulet, by just taking it off and never wearing it but I always had it by my side for answers that I may or may not find one day.

I have left my home town for this search, I have left everything behind just so I can find a solution to cure the sanity that the amulet has broken, just so I can see sally again..

During my travels I found a small little girl (Pam)  crying in a back of a truck, I gave her a stuffed teddy bear that I have found in an abandoned store near by, it brought a beaming smile on her face and drops have stopped pouring down her eyes.

I decided to take her with me for safety because she was alone and didn't want her to be alone at a young age, So we traveled together and came across an abandoned town searching for food and shelter, we found a diner with no one in sight by then we were ambushed by thugs, so I wore the amulet to protect Pam, so I did and became all crazy and scared the thugs away and Pam was frightened and grabbed the amulet and snapped it off my neck, and was sad that he lost his sanity for a while which made him forget her.

He promised not to wear it ever again but will still keep it with him to find the answers he seeks.

Reviews

[matrixmark]

So, I finally get a bit of time and I am back onto this story of the amulet.
Ok, so - The first sentence needs cutting into 2 different sentences and so do a few of the others.

BUT, what I found in this chapter is that the amulet seems to turn people into something which they are not. They become a darker and violent version of themselves. Its it a curse or is there another or other secrets which this amulet holds. One thing is for sure, It's very imaginative and certainly intriguing to where this story is going to go. It's something which I do look forward to finding out. For sure I will continue to read, as and when I get time.

Just keep an eye on your sentence lenght - just some friendly advice.

Mark.

[Joey Nizz]

Thank you mark, Ill keep that in mind :)

I tried cutting the sentences, I just want my reviewers to enjoy this story, so thank you for your help :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Very good going, mysterious, interesting..

[Joey Nizz]

Im glad you think so :)

Thank you for reading :)

[Zephyr]

I liked the chapter......
Mysteriously interesting:)

[Joey Nizz]

Thanks Naat, thank you for your review :)

[Zephyr]

My pleasure ....