Gems: A New Age

Ignore grammar problems, those will be fixed later. What do you think of the story just in general? Its not really in chapters as of yet... because its still very much in progress. So what I have up so far is just what I have done so far.. I plan on adding some every few days or so.. but its not technically in chapters.. It'll be divided up into chapters later. Also note that my writing is copyrighted if you try and steal by ideas I will sue you. So please just don't do it. Thanks : )